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| Ryu-Zero-Rei 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuseThat is such a beautiful story, really I Love it. Hmm The Stars and those two, *sigh* really trgically beautiful. This is up to my Fav's sayo |
| Ahria 2005-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet! -Ahria |
| lost pen caps 2005-01-28 ch 1, | abuseso beautiful! i love this story. im gona add it to my favorites... |
| Dreaming One 2004-02-15 ch 1, | abusePerfect. That was positively perfect! I loved every word of it. It gave us exactly what we wanted, no more and no less. Not to mention how eloquently written it was. Keep Writing! And even better, Keep Writing Xellos/Filia! ;) ~May |
| Zanne Chaos 2004-02-13 ch 1, | abuse...AIE! Excuse me while I go squeal like a fangirl and get all sappy and swoon the way I do whenever I watch An Affair to Remember (only, yanno, without the sobbing hysterically at the end part) I really love your descriptions of the night sky. A sky full of stars (::beats away her inner B5 fangirl::) is one of my favorite sights. Night's my favorite time of day, after all. I love Xellos' 'tragically beautiful' description of them. It reminds me of an Elton John song I've tossed around in relation to X/F before, especially in this part: "Freedom's like the stars in the sky; alone and cold and burning, each one keeps their distance, if only we were stars, you and I." |
| Mistress DragonFlame 2003-06-27 ch 1, | abusewhat a lovly story! I like it alot! good use of explaning the difernce of the stars! it mathed f/x pefectly! bye bye Mistress DragonFlame "Sticks and stones may brake my bones but words will leave gashes that will feaster for all eternity..." dayly addtion to saying: "and there is no evadent to porve ya did it!" |
| Ludacris 2002-12-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was a real touching fanfic and I loved every bit of it. I just loved how you tied in the white and dark magic thing with their hands it seemed so pretty. Don't be discouraged to do a sequel cause this was great. Luda |
| Chromaticrainbow 2002-12-14 ch 1, | abuseWOW!! AWESOME FIC!! It was soamazing, and the theory of the stars was brilient!! I think I'm going to cry!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! Keeper-of-Fate godess of light, Megami no hoshi. |
| spare 2002-12-11 ch 1, anon. | abuse.... Beautiful. *wipes tears away* It was very sincerely done, I think. Refreshing. |
| RocketJess 2002-12-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good! A bit over-descriptive in parts, but that's the only thing I can find wrong with it. |
| Small Lady 2002-12-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh! Don't ya just love a good, sweet X/F story? Ever since I saw Try I've been convinced about them being good together, but its hard to explain. Something about Xelloss makes him a fruitcake but at the same time so "charming" as Shiver would put it that just makes you love him to death. What a complicated character! But you wrote him so nicely, dear. |
| RySenkari 2002-12-07 ch 1, | abuseAw, that's so sweet! I can't believe I didn't read it earlier! Moonlight talks are so kawaii, as are Xellos and Filia! I liked it when Xellos told Filia about the stars... very poignant! I like! |
| Kats 2002-12-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow... You know, I have seen that most f/x involves some sort of, well..., in some way defying the laws of their personalities. It's all hopeless romantics who will take any shortcut to acheive their goal, no matter how cheap and unreal it would be to the storyline. This one, for a fact, goes along very smoothly and keeps what they would really do within perspective, thus coming with one of the best. I have yet to see a story that contains romance that is better than this one. |
| Moogleborg 2002-12-07 ch 1, | abuseWonderful, beautiful and awesomely kawaii story, kupo! ^_^ I love it, great work, kupo! ^^ (Waves Xellos and Filia love flags) |
| Dark Fire Angel 2002-12-07 ch 1, | abuseOh my god... this is so good... *Sweatdrop* Can you believe this has actually made me sniffle? |