Great story! The twins are my fav characters! 10/10! keep it up!

Good stuff. It deserves a ten out of ten easily.
I would have preffered to see a dark ending, but what you gave us is ok.

I feel like the end after the fight with Mumm-Ra was rushed, but it was a great fic non the less.

Great fic, I simply can't stop reading.

That's it!? What happens then!? OMG! I'm gonna go insane!

WOW. for this being so good you havn't gotten many reviews, but I think it's great

A VERY good story lad (or lass). But I wonder if this is the end or the beging. Your good.

I read your story it was good, but some parts got little confusing when you said some name. but I like it. Keep writing