Like that would ever happen, Marco grabbing Rachel by the hips without her going
grizzly on him!

Great story!

that was cute

Gr8t that was fab

please tell me u r going to keep on writing! can u just email me back and tell me. I love marco/rachel stories and there are too few of them. thanks!

Wow, I think I could have sso much fun reading a Marco/Rachel. (I'm more of a T/R fan)But if you keep writing this I will continue to read this.

it was written well but I dont think that rachel would do that to Tobias. LIke i would prefer marco but shes...odd. And Jake was acting sort of girlie in the first part. But I liked it so write more.

Good piece, I absolutely love Marco/Rachel fics, their just isn't enough right minded people in this genre. Short and sweet, just the right touch of romance.

Wow. I never thought I'd like a Marco/Rachel pairing , but I like yours.

This is awesome! Rachel/Tobias is my classic favorite couple but I love this!