Sweet! I can't exactly imagine Holly doing all this, but it was funny. I'll be looking into the next one after work.

Holly grammar bad. Is annoying. Still funny. Like Wastepaper bandit, though Holly not bandit. Holly weirdo. Wish you would continue. Off to read next chapter. Bye.

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am now ** pants.


rite it frm Foaly's pov.

A now officially having hysterics... hahahahahahahaHA!

woot! hahaha!!
good chappie!!

I'm laughing my head off right now! :)

Loved it! It was absolutely hilarious and I think you captured their thoughts perfectly. Though I do wish you had continued it past chapter two...

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lol

Foaly next!! Great work.

This is really funny! More please!

This is so funny. My sides hurt from laughing so hard. Only one thing, Root wouldn't really be afraid of Trouble, and Trouble doesn't really care if people bully Grub.

funny, you must update. V.funny, write bout stupid foaly next

A little OOC, but that was hilarious xD

o, I loved your story! Please write more.

I laughed so hard I actually cried! Although I suspect you've abandoned this story, if you haven't I'll be very happy when you update!