I'm laughing my head off right now! :)

Loved it! It was absolutely hilarious and I think you captured their thoughts perfectly. Though I do wish you had continued it past chapter two...

No1

lol

Excellent job! I really love this one, very humurous! I couldn't help but smile at Holly's pranks, and though at first I wasn't sure about the way it was written, I soon decided it made the story much more amusing. Great job!

Me luffs. Write about Foaly. Foaly cool.

Lol! This is really funny! I love the way you wrote it!

MOre? Please?? YAY! v. funny!

That was so funny I had to laugh silently!

'Still, have wonderful memory of Beetroot inventing new shade of red. ' Loverly. Slightly IC, but not badly. let us hope there is never a HP crossover. Wastebin bandit+Gred and Forge= trouble :)

Favorite stories list? That would be a 'yes'. I read this once and have been searching for it froever but to no avail. Finally found it again completely by accident. Yay 4 me.

this is great! have no critisisms about this whatsoever! this is going straight on my favourites list... u havent finished have u? u best not! i wanna hear more from the wastebin bandit! are you gonna do diary entries for foaly and root etc etc aswell? i think you should, would be the icing of the cake :D

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHHAAHAAHAHHAAHAAHAH-* falls off chair on to cement basement floor*

ouch.

UPDATE PLEEZ! this is the most funny fanfic i have ever read... so update NOW.


P.S. add entry for FOALY... and something about an evil radioactive paper shredder...

Funny, but extremely out of character, if you ask me. I can't see Holly doing any of this.

really funny. plz rite another chapter

PS to Almaseti,
Holly? Mature? Ha ha. perish the thought.

hahahahahaha! Stupid Foaly! I need more!

That was funny as hell, but I'd think Holly's a bit more mature than that...

Cute and hysterical. Reminds me a lot of the Very Secret Diaries of the Lord of the Rings. It's kind out of character for Holly, but then again, it is a humor fic.

The world's most homosexual laugh has jus resounded around my room.

Sadly enough, it came from me.

I don't know whether to congratulate you on writing such a hilarious fic, or slap myself for making that noise.

Decisions, decisions...^_~

~PyRo

lol :) keep writhing, its great!! v. funny

*laughs insanely* wonderful! one of the best humour fics ive ever read!

Do one for Artemis...would he stoop that low?

Hm... Alrighty, then?

Muah *laughs hystericaly (cant spell it)* write more write more please how about doing foaly??

abalinyeth

Alright that anon reveiw you received WAS NOT FROM ME!!

I know who it was from though and i will ** kill them rest assured.

Angel Of The Storms

Kitty Rainbow--

See, I like this kind of fic. Light-hearted and not taking itself too seriously. I honestly thought it was rather brilliant, although I just read that you don't like people who gush. So, instead, I will be... not gushy?

Pookums? Stroke of genius -- people relate to pets. >.O (Like Bob.) Wastebaskets? Interesting thought. Can't quite imagine Foaly tripping though -- too many legs. Diary format nice touch. Where's Grub? Wah. I'd imagine HIM to be the Cubicle Bandit. Feh, no Grub. I'll just wander away, and hope you update. ^_^ Cheers, and never stop writing!!

~~ Nyghtvision

please write more !1

Weird. But that was kinda funny! HEHEH!

HA HA HA! This is funny sh%&! Update soon! Man, sugar high+funny sh%&=aching ribs and sore cheeks. Update anyways!

Hahahahahahaha! A brilliant piece of humor although I'm sure the other students in my college course are wondering why I keep sniggering! :D Great writing, keep it up!

lol that was funny! cant wait to see beetroots!

Whyyyyyyyyyyy haven't you writen the next one yet? WHY?! Please.... Please...

*slaps self* look at what you make me do! I'm pleading. Good reason to sign this as Liz so others don't know that it's me. It would completly ruin my rep.

Write it now! Or pass your mocks first and then write it. see! i can be compromising.

Excellent-ness! Now I want to grab a wastebin paint a evil smiley face on and make people trip over it. You've inspired my evilness of the day, thanks! Am looking forward to Artemis diary ^_^

ROTFLMAO!

Oh, jeez, that was good!

Captain Holly Short, practical jokester!

As someone who suffers from unregistered flamers posing as someone else (Monkey Queen, anyone?) I can safely assure you Angel of the Storm is not Angel of the Storms. I've dealt with Angel before, and although she does annoy me a lot she would never ask someone to shag her in an unregistered review.

Frankly, its written in the style of Monkey Queen and I wouldnt exactly die of shock if it was.

Kitty Rainbow, you being as smart as you are, probably know this. I'm just clearing it up to stop people from accusing the wrong person.

~Mr. Walrus

Hahahaha! LMAO!! ^_^ me likie!
god that was funni!
I think Foaly is a bit more of the "prankster" type than Holly though. but it was still funny!
luv the "Wastebin Bandit" thing!lol!! ^_^
~P.M.

This is the greatest story ever written I admire you so much, I am really into you! Can we meet in person and shag! Even though I'm a girl we can do it as where theres a will theres a Way!!!!!! Oh Yeah! I can't wait to lick you out fancy a 69er?

rolf! v. funny! v. good as well. kinda hard to imagine holly as a prankster though. i think foaly fits it better. you have to write more chapters!

omg, you HAVE to do more chapters! (i think you should do one on foaly...complete with sarcastic comments, of course.)

Sorry eaif II mistyoep, I'm laughning too haard to pay close enogugh attention.

(I now have slightly better control over dg my laughter now, I mean it's GOOD

He he he he he! Very Funni! I totally loved it! Will there be a follow up? ~Crystal

*cracks up, falls off chair* that is GOOD. really good. go insane prank wars!

*collapses in a heap cackling insanely* lol... oh... my... god... sooooooooooooooooooooo... funny... lol... write... more... soon....... please... *gives up trying to speak, and just submits to the rib cracking mirth* cya... *disappears under chair, shaking*

I really like this story. I find it hillarious and cute. *Gasp* *Gasp* Sorry *Gasp* out of *Gasp* breath, laughed *Gasp* to hard (collapses and goes into a laughing fit)

Love the story. Which other points of view are you going to use, apart from the obvious (i.e. Foaly)
It's a kool story, but I wish you would go in to a bit more detail for each day, but then maybe that's one of the things which makes it so funny.

--x-x--Keep writting--x-x--

*giggles* tis the Very Secret Diarys for AF. Now. Write artemis's one SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON. Me likies the wastepaper baskets, prankster!holly rocks. I shall finish of that AF fic like I promised. Soon. Honest *runs awaaaaaaaaaaaay*

Ack! I just wrote this fantastic review, and then I went and wrote it off! Grr, arg... ;)
This is a wonderful fan fic. I've read Cassie's series and loved them to bits - I can tell that you have too! I'm really looking forward to the way in which you plan to interlink your following 'interludes'...could be interesting! Also, the way in which you've carefully pre-conceived the dynamics within the LEP is great - that takes real preparatory 'brain time'. How else could you have used Holly's position as the only female officer in Recon to such hilarious effect? "Planned to hide from him in girls' toilets - then discovered door was still welded shut."
Priceless.
Keep having fun with what you're doing - I can hardly wait! Oooh, Foaly's in for it.....

HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lolol, genuinely funny, do keep writing... my I'm getting pathetic in my reviews. No time. I do apoligize.

ehheeeeheeee.... I must read more.... write... or else.

hehehe! Stupid Foaly! You should do a diary for him!

HIHIHIHIHIHIHIHIHIHI!!!!

Very good!! Are you going to continue it? I LOVE this story. ^_^ please continue

YOU... MUST... CONTINUE!!! This is really hilarious, and I'm reading this for the 400th time. Literally. Faves list!!!

that was hillarious Kitty! absoluetly Hillarious! Although I have had all the anticipation of random comments that have been piling up for ages.

I liked the style you used and it was very effective in this. The short sentences and straight logic makes it even funnier than it would be if it didn't have this. And I'm just on a high from all that randomness so don't mind me...much. It is also 10 past 1 am so...

Well, I like and I hope you're posting the next chap before ... something.

How about I just squee.

SQUEE!!!

*cackles*

You know, that's one of the first times I've actually not cackled insanely... just... cackled, in good humour. I really, really enjoyed this. I love the style; especially the diary form. My mum is looking at me strangely because I'm laughing for no reason. The funny thing is, I can actually picture Holly doing this. It's very fitting.

Faves it goes...

Stupid Foaly.

Hehe! This is funny! Good job! Please continue!

*~crazygirly007~*