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| Forrest 2007-06-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseFoaly next!! Great work. |
| Sovrani 2007-01-28 ch 2,  | abuseThis is really funny! More please! |
| Faerytale Princess 2006-12-12 ch 2, | abuseThis is so funny. My sides hurt from laughing so hard. Only one thing, Root wouldn't really be afraid of Trouble, and Trouble doesn't really care if people bully Grub. |
| keymasters 2006-12-01 ch 2, | abusefunny, you must update. V.funny, write bout stupid foaly next |
| piwqefjk 2006-11-30 ch 2, | abuseA little OOC, but that was hilarious xD |
| Bunny-Rabbit-Jack 2006-08-13 ch 2, | abuseo, I loved your story! Please write more. |
| LandUnderWave 2006-06-26 ch 2, | abuseI laughed so hard I actually cried! Although I suspect you've abandoned this story, if you haven't I'll be very happy when you update! |
| By Grace Alone 2006-05-10 ch 2, | abuseL.O.V.E it! Great job! I hope you update soon, you should have a chapter of Foaly's point of view, very funny. Excellent job! |
| cat 2006-05-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseOH GOD...CANT STOP LAUHING...PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
| Transcendental Secret 2005-12-06 ch 2, | abuseThis was really funny, my sister was laughing at it too. You should do Foaly next! Please?!? ~Mars |
| potter-DorK 2005-09-02 ch 2, | abuseHA! Hilarious!need more! please? |
| IndentityCrisis 2005-08-31 ch 2, | abuseHey this rules! Its hilariouse! Update before a year and a half! yay! |
| FetishFemale 2005-05-28 ch 2, | abuseHa, I so knew it was Grub! Well, not really...keep updating! |
| Nota Lone 2005-03-21 ch 2, | abuse'I had a moment when I wondered if the wastebins were fed up of having rubbish dumped in them and were rebelling.' - hate it when that happens. I implore you, make the weight be lessened this time. |
| dixiechiq 2005-02-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseHee hee v. funny I know you're done with it. |
| FairyHunter 2004-09-09 ch 2, | abuseYay! I really enjoyed this... I know I'm kind of late, but it was funny. Fake moustaches are cool. :) ~FairyHunter |
| ArTeMiSfOwL Mature mix 2004-04-02 ch 2, | abuse^_^ funny, try making a Foaly's tale. |
| Captin Amy 2004-03-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseYou Wet Your pants shame! Root:Oh shut up! |
| Captin Amy 2004-03-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseFrom:Captin Amy To:Captin short,holly Subject-told "Root got bare told yesturday,its great!" |
| Captin Amy 2004-03-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseFrom:Captin Amy To:Captin short,holly Subject-told "Root got bare told yesturday,its great!" |
| Captin Amy 2004-02-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseMust kill the centaur!that was my chair not hollys!bloody centaur... *I Hold a plastic carrot in hand* Foaly I have a carrot for you... |
| Kuro the Spork Queen 2003-12-14 ch 2, | abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! *cough* okay, sorry about that. but that was probably one of the three funniest things i've ever read. ^-^ very good |
| Maethoriell 2003-12-06 ch 2, | abuseOh but Root it vil come out and you vill be the laughing stock of the LEP. |
| mutty 2003-11-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseROFL funniest stuff ive ever read please write more *walks off laffing to self* |
| the-bee-keeper 2003-11-06 ch 2, | abuseHaven't laughed so much in ages loved it write more plz! |
| kiesh 2003-10-30 ch 2, | abuseThat was the funniest fanfic i've ever read i'm still laughing like 3 minutes later! |
| Radioactive Bubblegum 2003-10-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! More ASAP!! This is really good! |
| slime frog 2003-10-30 ch 2, | abuse*rolls about cackling* oh Kitty, you have such genius... *wipes away happy tear* oh, I love it so... amazingly wonderful and funny! ten months! I think that's a record... *presents Kitty with an award for 'The Longest Recorded Update Time'* congratulations! bry: slime, please. this is just sad beyond words... I never said I wasn't said... anyway, very very good. good luck with doing the next chapter before 2010... ;) |
| Trinity Day 2003-10-29 ch 2, | abuseI liked this one a lot better. Again, it's not extremely in character, but it's better than Holly's was in my opinion. I don't think Root is that stupid/oblivious. I liked the line: Did not realise he was a civilian until he ran away without saluting. Also liked Root contemplating about whether the wastebins were revolting. And I loved the line about Frond. |
| LadyLupinLover 2003-10-29 ch 2, | abusehahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha funny hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. didnt even read this on fanfic.net read it on that other site. hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha |
| throgmorten 2003-10-29 ch 2, | abusemwhahahahahaha- holly is evil ; ) pleez update. with foaly's story! |
| TazMoon 2003-10-29 ch 2, | abuseHey! Great story! Loadsa luv luv luv Taz X X X |