 ZombieSlayer 2008-04-01 . chapter 12I'm still waiting. You know that last part, the sentence, 'at leadt I still had yuki'.
I have a bad feeling that Yukito is going to leave him too.
I hope I'm wrong. |
 xJoby 2007-11-18 . chapter 12I read this story before, but I forgot to review ^_^ I really enjoyed! The last chapter sounded like it could be the end, but does it still continue? :D I'd love to read your other stories, and I will when I finish.. homework ^^
Joby |
 Gwen 2007-08-01 . chapter 12 You wanna know if 'I still love you'.Well why don't we ask the twitching eye if I still love you. |
 ohtar 2007-06-25 . chapter 12 2004?! its been 3 years! update story! lol its so good so far! |
 Alice in June 2006-07-01 . chapter 12I hate it when I come across something I really like but I manage to sound reduntant.
Fantastic work, your characterization of Touya is spot-on ( and very intimate, his fears about losing his sister and all) and believable. Character interactions are great (I loved Sakura teasing Touya about his age) and I really liked how you handled everything. And I mean everything.
Your portrayal of Touya and Yukito's relationsip is ... God help me with vocabulary, awesome. It's what it should be. It's not sugar-coated but it's real.
Excellent work, L-chan *thumbs up*! |
 aznguy108 2006-02-15 . chapter 12Is this story being continued? Even on any other site? |
 Weaver 2005-11-12 . chapter 12 ^^ this is such a good story! kepp it up! i can't wait to read more of it! |
 Crazy Sardines 2005-09-15 . chapter 12This story's really good. The characterization is almost flawless. I could almost see it leading to your story Shadows. It's really great that some of the things that were a bit blur at the beginning of Shadows due to the large gap from the end of CCS is all being cleared up with this story. It's really good that little by little, details about Touya's way of thinking and feelings are revealed. The change in him is not too drastic which what makes it all reasonably possible.
Although I would like to think that it would be nice to have something that would clear up Tomoyo's change of attitude towards Sakura in Shadows (She was a bit OOC there). But since this is a Touya centric fic and all is in Touya's POV, that is not highly likely to be included. But I do hope that more T/Y would be written next time. I'm really anxious to see how their relationship would turn out, good or bad. :)
Anyway, keep up the good work! I hope that you'd continue this. It's one story that I'll wait for to be updated. Update soon! :) |
 Haliled 2005-07-04 . chapter 12PLEASE FINISH THE STORY! |
 Haliled 2005-07-03 . chapter 1NICE! I like this! ^__^ |
 justareviewer 2005-04-06 . chapter 12 Nope, I won't pressure you to update, but I'm just dropping by to let you know people are still reading this. I still think its a pretty good story. |
 Ice Crystal Angel 2004-12-17 . chapter 12Because of this story I am totally hooked on the T/Y pairing. They are just so cute together and seem the most realistic out of all of the CCS pairings. You've kept close to the original storyline and I think that’s great. You definitely have a way with words and everything just flows so smoothly together. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
 sillyme 2004-07-18 . chapter 12 More! More! I'm begging you... please *with puppy eyes* |
 Verna-S 2004-05-09 . chapter 1Good story!
Interesting to see Yue as a disinterested-yet-secretly-caring individual, like in the anime, instead of fandom!Yue, who tends to be all like "argh nobody can touch me but Clow!", which in my opinion is fun to write but maybe a little skewed.
You handled the first person narration so well that the use of the personal pronoun "I" didn't ** me off. It was as if the narrator were Touya. You handled everyone's characterization beautifully and stayed true to the plot. |
 Kurochan 2004-05-02 . chapter 12Awesficcy I cant wait to see more of it |