dat was sweet. and really beautiful...

Not so bad! Not as bad as you think. I agree with your earlier sentiments, though. It is a bit.. odd, isn't it? I like it, though. Must have been hell to classify beyond romance!

U r just obsessed with making them gay and u give out flames like ur pirfect u no wat UR NOT and ur the one whos writing sucks

Lovely.

(not ridiculous)

This isn't ridiculous. It's lovely!

Another so interesting story. I have no clue where you get your ideas...but I love it. ;p

I'll admit it. I am not really a slash reader or writer or whatever. But this was REALLY REALLY well-written. Liked it =)

Kudos to you.

that was really good, you should try working that into a story.but it's also good on it's own:)

Damn. That was just- excellent! You know many of the best writers out there say to improve your work you have to "cut out all unnecessary words." I can't remember who said it- Hemingway, or someone like that. Anyway, the point I'm TRYING to make is that you HAVE cut out all unnecessary words. What you have written tells the whole dynamics of Draco and Harry's relationship without getting bogged down in unnecessary detail. Really liked it!
Love,
ARI.
XXXX

Very nice.^^ I enjoyed it muchly.

very nice,their gay,o my god i still cant get over that,^^

Quite confusing. I liked it, but I'm not sure about the ending. It sounds like they like eachother, you know, more than friends. It was good, and I encourage you to write more. Though I hope you do not need my consent to do so.