Yay! I've finally read my first crossover! ^__^ Ari, this story was just excellent. Like I said, I've watched DBZ enough to know all the characters--Trunks is my favorite, but little Trunks (like that wasn't foreseen? :P)--and adding Ash in the mix was really interesting. And most of the other names I recognized, too. Overall, though, I don't know I needed to know any of the characters to really enjoy it. It was very well written, and the balance between drama and humor was great. I especially loved when Goku tripped over Ash's headphone wires! LOL! And that one extravagant house blowing the fuse in Trunks' neighborhood! ^O^;; Aw man, that musta sucked...but anyhoo! I wanted to hug and hold Ash so much in this! ;_; Heh, I'm a sucker for major Ash-angst, yayness! I'm so bad... I'm so glad he has a nice family now--he didn't deserve any of the misery his real father put him through. It's good to see that he knows now what having a loving dad is all about. Ari, everything about this fic was great! In fact, I added it to my favorites! ^^ Great job, and get a new chapter of PWD out soon! ~_^

Quite enjoyable, again I find that this story is well done for characterization and detail.
A fine that there is a lot of warmth in this tale early on, but that is something that happens in a story of this type. Ash's personality change is the most interesting thus far... something that I didn't expect from his personality and attitude. Iori's is another one to watch, since I find that his is an unexpected twist as well, being the character that he is.

Great work yet again, Ari Rockefeller. Keep up, your writing. And thank you giving me some enjoyable fanfiction to read as always.


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