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MewMew2 2007-06-17 . chapter 2
Wow. uh yeah, interesting um angle to the YamixYuugi relationship. Yami is a narcissistic ** with a Loita complex eh? I had my suspicions. Thank you for writing this fic. It was very inspiring and creatively done.
Brittanga 2004-10-04 . chapter 2
I'm cracking up here. That was TOO funny. I cannot decided what is more hilarious: Jou's complete lack-of-brain or Yami's complete lack-of-ego-filter. Well done.
x Hearts 2004-08-24 . chapter 2
hm...interesting and disturbing...all at the same time. a bit...eccentric. lol. :) CONTINUE SOON!
shippo 2004-08-03 . chapter 2
That was soo funny...i never thought of Yami Yuugi as such an airhead...its a funny side to him...because he is always so serious
aniemluvr 2004-05-31 . chapter 2
You're right in saying that it ended up being disturbing. The yaoi stuff was good, but... You took the characters a little too far, so to say. Joey isn't quite that stupid, andYami isn't evil or so full of himself. And since when does Yami laugh like a maniac? Oh well.. You've probably closed this to look at a nicer review, but I think that criticism(did I spell that right?) is a good way to find your weaknesses and fix them. Plz update soon.^_^
Amiasha Ruri 2004-03-20 . chapter 2
*Cackles* That was very, very demented. XD I liked it, though. Yami's so obsessed with himself. XD I love the mirror idea. And the ranting about YBakura, and Malik, etc. XD
Ah yes, I agree though. The Yami/Hikari pairings are a bit scary. XD Anyway, great little continuation. XD Very amusing.
Strega 2004-03-11 . chapter 2
Loved chapter two. If you were completely obsessed with yourself, wouldn't you just love your double??
Refreshing twist on the Y/YY relationship!
anonymous 2003-12-20 . chapter 2
Um you do KNOW that Shadi DID unock Yugi's mind to see if he had the Millenium Eye?!
Sailor Comet 2003-12-13 . chapter 2
::cackle:: this is great. XD I alternate between loving and hating/mocking/laughing at Yami Yuugi. You just sent me off into a mocking mood, I think. >=D
~Sam
Vykky (Mikazuki "too cool to log in" Kagaya 2003-10-01 . chapter 2
Hey, you updated this! Very well written...but why is the first chapter after the new chapter?

Mariko: Oh, be nice!
Shizuna: Yuugi deserves better!
Mariko: You be nice too...{evil grin}
Shizuna: Well, yami x omote pairings aren't our favorites anyway-
Mariko: Except that Shizuna thinks pairing up two guys who look just like each other is hot-
Shizuna: And Vykky, or whatever she calls herself online, likes Ryô with anyone on the show-
Mariko: Which is weird since she still thinks Ryô's her husband-

Guys...
Ahem. Excuse my hyper OCs. Like I was saying, normally I can't stand character bashing, but Yami Yuugi bashing (or Kamiya Kaoru bashing or Mitsuki Kaho bashing) is quite refreshing. Always a good thing to have a laugh at the expense of obnoxious pharaohs.
Yami Yuugi is not getting my Cowbell.

Shizuna: Hey, I want a Sennen Item.
Mariko: I want chocolate. And men.
Shizuna: You always do.
Mariko: And you don't?
Shizuna: Hell yeah I do!

No cursing in the review. Sorry about them...gonna go read your Mahaado story now.

Mariko: Yes, excellent ficcing.
Shizuna: You have the S & M seal of approval.
Mariko: That sounds wrong...
Shizuna: She can figure out what it stands for. Say hi to Japan for me!
Rowan and Sakura 2003-09-30 . chapter 1
Rowan: *snickers* Sakura's gone nuts!
Sakura: *going nuts* Yami Yuugi is soo not like that! Grr!
Rowan: Haha! He used to be a Pharaoh, of course he'd be like that! But yes, that chapter *was* slightly disturbing...
Nieni Woodland 2003-09-30 . chapter 2
Nieni:... erm... that was more disturbing than funny... *hides from the scary yami*

... I kinda liked the first chapter, though I kinda wish Joey had figured it out. ^-^; Oh well! That just gives me more reason ta get the dumb blonde ta fall in love with kaiba!
Windswift 2003-06-18 . chapter 1
Heehee! One of my friends does that head-cocking thing too! It's so hilarious!

(sighs) Only Jou... (shakes head hopelessly)

^^ That's so funny! It may be pointless, but I enjoyed it, so count it as a job well done! ^^
Jaid Skywalker 2003-05-13 . chapter 1
Well, I'm very much a non-yaoi person but...ROFL! That was too funny; you know it probably would happen that way...Jou is very blonde at times...

^__~ congrats! This is the first yaoi I've ever read/reviewed. (Now don't you feel special? *rolls eyes* lol)
Anime*Angel*Fox 2003-05-12 . chapter 1
ROFL! This was hilarious! Jounouchi's a baka! NEway, this is another one of your stories that's going on my fave list!

~A*A*F

P.S. "The Odd and Original Couple" has been updated, again.
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