Hey, I know you wrote this like a year ago, and prolly don't even think about it anymore, but I think you should consider taking it further. It's great as it is, but I would love to see what else you could do with this. Anywho, jsut a random thought of mine. Great story!

This is a good story, covering something a lot of kids go through, especially with siblings. You write well, but please find a beta reader or get a spell checker and a grammer checker. All the mispelled/wrong use words really take away from this story.

Interesting....kinda but this story should not get a G rating- its really either R or a strong PG13

Awwwww yay Prue for saving her.