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IHasCheezbugers 2007-12-17 ch 9,	abuseOh My Lord. I Cried. Really I did. I was so amazing. The way to put your words together is astounding. Write more like this and you'll be great. Sarah
OddSocks 2007-10-06 ch 1,	abuseI just have to comment on a superb piece of writing. You really involved yourself in this story and that I admire. Also you tapped into the most basic, primitive emotions that we rarely feel, as well as the most sophisticated and articulated thoughts that makes people unique. The little montage you did about prayer was phenomonal...as everyone experiences the inner conflict with religion..especially in times of immense turmoil. It is the one thing that connects people at some point in theyre lives...when theyre human mind cannot proccess what is hapening we turn to a higher power, whom we believe to have a reason for doing something that the mind cannot find a logiacl explination for. You succeded in creating the scary "Bad Guy" as in my opinion...one of the scariest things to imagine is when someone believes that they are truley doing good, and when this involves human life it extremely frightening. To finish off this extremely long review(I got carried away) your story picks up the fragility of human life, and how death is never just a physical thing, but also very much a phycological event, also excuse the extreme cliche but you dont know what you have until you lose it and when what you lose has the chance to come back..its like a second chance at life. Amazing writing..well done...I clap at your genuis. =D Claire
Cosmic Castaway 2007-07-18 ch 9,	abuseWow, what to say that probably has been said better then I could ever put into words. This story was freaking phenomenal! I felt as though I should be praying for Nick’s will being and tell him DON’T GO TOWARDS THE FREAKING LIGHT! You have a very unique way of story telling; definitely different to those I have read before hand. Loved it and I wish I had more intelligent ways to put this, but you did a beautiful piece, thank you so much for writing it!
pepper-shaker 2007-05-22 ch 9,	abuseOh..Damn you! You were the first person to make me cry while reading a fanfic!! lol! wipes tears off keyboard Well keep up the good work. Nothing more I can say. You are superb. MoNkEy'S iN sPaCe!!
hanily 2007-01-13 ch 9,	abusehi...that is the best story ive ever read... it made me cry and im shaking ... well done your going on my favorites!!
AndAct 2006-11-16 ch 9,	abuseWhoo, ... I dont know what to say...That story was great. Your writing is amazing and in a way, almost lyrical in its flow, timing, and sense of rythum. You alow beats, seperate moments, each one a pinnical; this is somthing that i belive every writer struggles with, letting there be many moments (beats) of change in a story, not just one climatic event. I mean of course each story has its climatic moment, but a truly great story has smaller climaxes before that, ones that let us see how each charecter is changed or grows from the main issue. Thanks for a great story, you truly have a golden pen. AA
Corabe 2006-06-25 ch 9,	abuseThis was incredible, I have never felt so many different emotions at the same time, you have an incredible gift and I am honored that I was able to experience it. Thank you.
AlexCurtis 2006-06-05 ch 5,	abusegood
thebondgirl 2006-02-11 ch 9,	abuseOMG (shivers) cool, creepy, and intimidating ending! awesome story, can't wait until i submit this review then move on to what i think is the sequel!:):)
Mma63 2005-12-02 ch 9,	abuseWow...that was the second time I read your story. What amazing description of deep emotions, fears and hope from each one of the team. I struggled with my own tears more than once while reading... Great Work! Please come back with more!
Roadkill 2005-07-13 ch 9, anon.	abuseWow...I love the descriptive writing. It's great and really helped me visualize the story. I was nearly in tears. Thank you so much for that story.
PonchoLives 2005-06-22 ch 9,	abuseI just read your story. It was very well done. Keep up the good work.
Baa 2005-02-12 ch 9, anon.	abuseWOW! put simply that is all i can say! you are so descriptive in your writing and the emotions are so touching. Now, please excuse me whilst i go untie my stomach! = ) Baa
DolphinAnimagus 2005-01-28 ch 9,	abuseThis story was amazing. Your prose was descriptive and emotional--more like a novel than fanfiction. You dug into the battle between good and evil, showing that hope and faith will conquer. I can't tell you how many times you had me gasping out loud during the story, especially when you described the emotions of the team when they thought Nick had died. It's quite refreshing to find an excellent story like this with so much emotion and mastery of prose, while keeping the characters in character. Amazing.
famousames 2005-01-08 ch 9,	abuseYour story digs deeper into the human psyche than I ever thought possible. The core of your story seems to be good and evil and faith. In the world today it seems like Christianity only gets ridiculed, yet you present it just as it should be- as hope. This story is so emotional, it had me in tears. You presented the characters in a deeper light than they have them on the show. You had me grieving for a fictional character, who in this story I thought was my best friend. There's just no way to put into words the brilliance of this piece. Your descriptiveness had me thinking I was reading a novel, not a piece of fanfiction. There are so many wonderful quotes that come from this story- that have nothing to do with CSI, and there are some that embrace the characters and their emotions so well. Your edicate is amazing, this story is amazing. Your faith is amazing. I honestly cannot think of another word to describe this story but amazing.

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