yay i liked it ! can't wait to read the next one!

ok yay off to Egypt!

yay! plot picks up! reading next chapter!

i like it. watch out for your run-on's and quotes, remember to not put a paragraph directly after a quote. such as:
"hello" bill said. (paragraph inserted here)
and try to make it more clear as to who's speaking.
but other than that i like it! i'm off to read the rest.
~pointe master

Boy, Kaiba in real life *shivers* Yipes. Poor Bill. Dude, I feel for you man, I truly do.

Then Yami came out of nowhere, stood next to Yugi, and blinked. Yugi then looked at Yami; they both screamed in surprise and fell over. Ann blinked at them in confusion, what the heck was that.

if only that was animated, lmao! great image though.

Great story look forward to reading the sequel!

You sound just like a girl I know. Funny, so does the school and Bill and Kyle. Is Marie, Nicole???!!! Actualy, ignore me, i'm probably wr ong, but anyway... I don't watch Yugioh, too much homework :(, but you make it sound interesting. I'll definitaly read on, and GREAT story!!!!!!!!!!

Your next story sounds funny, I can't wait to read it!

“Must… hug…funny bunny!” LOL thats great icant wait!!! but if bill said shes gonna need it WHY?!?!!? is it an item???? O.O from the real world??? hmmmmm, hows bill, what's his 'seminar' and how was he able to turn seto into funny bunny? WHY o WHY was ann reading about hair gel? O.o anyway please please write faster!!! and do you think you would mind if i swipes your idea about the shadow games tearing the world in two? i will give you complete credit for it but it could really help one of my stories, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! pretty please?!?!?!?!?!!?!? your just so much more origional than me, *mumbling other flattering remarks* please!?! oh and please post soon!!!

wow great story! It's written very well. I hope you get around to writting the sequal!
JA!
-catQueen Of Pluto

-.o do another chappie! such a cool story.

Cathreana: Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
Starlight: SHUT UP, YAMI!!
Cathreana: Sequel! Sequel! *jumps up and down*
Starlight: *smacks her yami*
Cathreana: Hay! Why`d ya do that?!
Starlight: As my Yami was saying, we would like- Cathreana: You to do a sequel. Only this time gi-
Starlight: *slaps her yami* Give yourself a Mill-
Cathreana: Millennium Item. The Millennium Brac-
Starlight: Shut up!! The Millennium Bracelet. Yo-
Cathreana: You know the one you got in Egypt. Als-
Starlight: ALSO!!
Cathreana: *hids*
Starlight: And also, go to the Yugioh world-
Cathreana: *from behind the bed* Yourself. Why is-
Starlight: *twich* WHY IS UP TO HER, CATHREANA!
Cathreana: *thinks* I need to find the number for-
Starlight: You might need Anima Insurance for this. *stalks to her yami with fist out*
Cathreana: Uh oh, I should of let her say it. *runs for dear life*
Starlight: Ja ne! *chases her yami*

Sequel! I was wondering, maybe I missed it, what happened to Pegasus? Did he escape? I really liked this story though, the ending was sad, but I (this is only my opinion) thought the story was overall sweet, but funny. That's how I like em! Again, can't wait for the sequel!

Bookdragon, keep up the good work on the story. I hope you make a sequel. I am really looking forward to one.

Crystal