Nice story! And you gotta love the agnst, eh?
It's just scary that i wrote a story on the same topic, but with a radically different ending...not as good as your's though!
(btw...it's Chloe)
-A+B

*picks up pen and paper and hands it over to author* There. Go write. You can't leave it like that, you did a *great* job with this. Please continue.

- Wai

Holy crap. JUST the thing to read over morning coffee. *grin* I... hm. I'd say go on with it if your muses insist, yes. I'd love to see where this one goes. Ran with emotion? Neat concept.

;__________; poor aya. poor ken... that part when ken came in was so tender. will you do a flashback as to what exactly happened and what was said when aya-chan was killed?? will there be a flashback of the whole mission? ;____; more please!

screwed up? no way. it's not screwed up at all. You described Aya's despair very well. And also the sweetness when Ken was holding him. write more?