 Thunderchild 2004-01-24 . chapter 10This was very well written.
I can actually see Lyle tripping over himself every time Aimee/Emily was around. The scene in the first chapter at the storage cupboard was funny. “…do I need to sedate you? |
 Onisius 2003-12-28 . chapter 10Wow! you made me feel sorry for lyle, hate jarod, got me excited when lyle and emily got engaged. got my upset when Sam was talking about real and birth mums. you wow-ed me with the revoultin about brootes or should i saw rand? and such a happy ending! i cant wait to read the sequal. *smiles* oh and i loved the whole peter parker - spider ting. brillant thinking |
 Joy 2003-04-19 . chapter 10 I loved this story. It was full of intrigue and romance and everything else that goes along with the Centre. Thans you again. |
 maestra 2003-02-04 . chapter 10RRP,
Well that was a great twist there at the end, Angelo's little revelation there was quite shocking. LOL
I really enjoyed it you have some awesome lines of dialogue in there too.
Looking forward to the next RRP fic. |
 Bec-Bec 2003-02-04 . chapter 10"The Centre is gone, the family is whole. They tried to break you, but they failed. They will always fail, for family is always stronger. The evil are gone, and the good have returned. It is safe to return to the light, for the light no longer means danger as it once did. The lies have withered in the heat of the sun, and faded away with the cleansing rain. The moist ground springs forth anew with life. There is no fear, for there is nothing to be afraid of. But it is not over, for there are still lives to live. Do not lose hope, no matter how hard it will be. Do not give up, for it is always worth fighting for."
Wow. Angelo's monologue is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.
Wow, plot twist after amazing plot twist. I give you a 10.0 for utter originality...though, it's "You run,I chase"or "I run and you chase" in the movie...but that's just a little mistake. Sequel? Count me in for reviews. Love Ya! |
 Bethe 2003-02-04 . chapter 10WOW!!! Just...just...WOW!!! BRAVO!!! Wonderful ending! I knew Sam wasn't dead! I knew it I knew it I knew it! And Broots? Holy Cow! Nice way to show the real him, eh? And then there's Angelo! He's gotta tell them! And I'm all for Jarod and Parker having their own kids, as well as adopting. Hey, am I the only person who thinks Jarod is UBER HOT with longer hair? (personally, he's hot no matter his hairstyle, fashion sense, you get the picture) but the long hair is mega sexy! *pouts* I totally sympathize with Jarod on this one. Anywho, nice job on the fic. I am eagerly awaiting the sequel. Toodles! |
 maestra 2003-02-03 . chapter 4RRP-
It is great so far. I really liked the way you have given Lyle the little understood disease of Chronic Fatigue Syndrome. By the sensitivity with which you write about it, I would say you probably know someone with it.
Great job. You really floored me with that whole Aimee/Emily double identity thing! LOL
Hope to see you online again soon! |
 Skydaybreak 2003-02-03 . chapter 10 I loved it!1 It was great!! Yay!! Okay, okay....calm...
Ahh!!!! lol. I think you did a great job and can't wait for the sequel. Hallelliuah, the hair is gone!! ...I still want em' to have their own kids though...*hint, hint* *push* lol. Sky |
 Skdaybreak 2003-01-30 . chapter 8 Ahhh!! That's mean!!
Lol. Pleeeaase post soon. I got to know what happened to him. *sniffle* sky |
 Bethe 2003-01-30 . chapter 8Ooo...yet another interesting chapter. I got your email last night that said chaps 7 *and* 8 were up, but the site only displayed chap 7. I was finally able to read the 8th chap today. Poor AJ! Poor Parker, too, when she finds out what happened to Sam. And I thought I smelled something fishy when Broots said the Centre was transferring him. They wouldn't let him off that easy. Debbie's a pretty smart kid. Anywho, I'm waiting the next chapter (I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT'S HAPPENED TO LYLE!!!). Toodles! |
 Sunflower 2003-01-29 . chapter 8Eeep! New chapters! Really, really suspenseful new chapters. I hope everything turns out okay *looks worried* or poor AJ's gonna be crushed. |
 Bethe 2003-01-29 . chapter 7Oooo...yet another interesting chapter. Darn cliffhangers! I hate it when other writers use them, but I love to use them myself. And I guess I kinda love it when other writers use them too. Poor Sam! He can't die! He just can't! Who else would Jarod have to exchange wits with? He needs to be called "Broom Man" again(touch of genius, if you ask me). Methinks Sam has become the sleeper character of this fic. His role has increased so much lately, and he's just so darn lovable! Oh, wells. I am anxiously awaiting your next update. And if it isn't soon, I may have to revert to Sunflower's tactics (thank you, Sunflower, btw ;~p) Until next chapter! Toodles! |
 Sauron764 2003-01-29 . chapter 7Cool, and the last scene with Lyle and Cox was hilarious, until the end.
Keep it up, and the idea of hunting down reviewers is a good one.
Go you! |
 Sunflower 2003-01-28 . chapter 6UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE* |
 Alia G.L. 2002-12-30 . chapter 1 Awesome!!! I love it. When will the next chapter be up? *gives RRP the puppy-dog eyes* Please make it soon. I can't wait to see what happens. Keep up the good work. I think Lyle and Emily are perfect for each other. |