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| paperbackwriter199 2007-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseWell written. Very sad. Very sweet. |
| WillowWhiskers 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sad, it literally made me cry. Fantastic story and writing style, great job. |
| ColbyWolf 2004-06-29 ch 1, | abusegods... this was beautiful.. honestly.. I stand up and applaud for you... I.. words cannot describe the emotions rushing through me right now... simply to say... this is an amazing bit of writing... a perfect bit of reality.. of life--or rather: Life and reality as it should have been in the A.I. world... Indeed... what the idea should be... the best idea... A thing of beautiful crystal structure held in an eternal loop from now until The End... in a world where so many humans would be so much more content to smash such thoughts in a brutal rage, extinguishing the light forever in the moment where fear, pain and sadness reaches the utter pinical of emotion... Beautiful. Good job... very... very good job... |
| Catrin 2003-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuse...Wow. I'd say this is fantastic, or great, or wonderful, but I really need to improve on my vocabulary. I'd imagine deactivating mecha-children (or whatever you might call it) is a heart-wrenching job for the people who do it. I hate Cybertronics! You'd think they'd be human enough to have the sense to not sell David's siblings. And I think we all agree that as long as your love is real, it doesn't matter if you're not. Yes, I know, I just took A.I.'s teaser whatchamacallit and added a few words, but I needed to rant. Anyway, I hope you write more fics like this! One of the best I've ever read! |
| Cat's Meow 2003-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI was just browsing around and found this. Wow...VERY piognant. And very, very well written. Forgive me if I point out one tiny error; the word "site"... I think you mean "sight". I've seen other authors made the same mistake. But it's very minor, anyway. This is absolutely excellent fic I ever read. So sad and so moving...and all the more power to you! |
| Scary Vampiress 2003-03-30 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I cried, It's so well written and heart-wrenching! ::sob:: This is so sad! |
| Matrix Refugee 2002-12-09 ch 1, | abuseI actualy read this fic on your site, but I was glad you put this here, since this is slightly easier to print out (My eyesight is a little weak, so I print out fics and read 'em at my leisure later instead of getting eyestrain squinting at the screen). Like your other fics, this is very thought-provoking and philosophical...and it's appropriately dark. I've often talked with friends, therapists, etc. about the dark quality there is to Christmas/the Decembver holidays, and this fills the bill. Also gives us a perspective on the techs who have to work on David's siblings and their reaction to certain thankless tasks... |