 Carolyn 6/1/01 . chapter 1 Great story! I always thought that Amy had feelings for Hannibal! |
 Jalyn 12/11/00 . chapter 1 Hi, this is the first time I've commented on A-Team fan fiction. I've always enjoyed the show, but when I found the FF genre, I was overwhelmed by all the slash *blech* fiction out there about these four great guys. I alway look for this kind of fiction for this show, I really like this so far. I do have to say that you need a good beta reader to catch your spelling and typos. They really distract from an otherwise great start. |
 Baked Goldfish 11/14/00 . chapter 1Looks really interesting. . . can we get some more out of you? |
 shar 11/14/00 . chapter 1 Interesting h/c story if that's where you're going. A few minor inconsistencies that would only annoy an English teacher (Bet you thought we didn't indulge) as there for their is a particular irritant. Overall, much better than average. |
 Sarah 11/13/00 . chapter 1 hi, this is an excellent story so far, I can't wait to read more
Sarah ) |
 gaz 11/13/00 . chapter 1 I have, trouble with suspense please continue soon |
 murdy 11/13/00 . chapter 1 oh! OH! OH!
Write more, write more!
HURRY! |
 Jennifer 11/13/00 . chapter 1 Great story. I can't wait to read the rest. |
 Juliet316 2000 11/11/00 . chapter 1 What is going on between Murdock and Amy? Hmmmmm... Nice humanizing of Decker, at least he has a heart. |