I almost cried, you evil person. My lip was quivering, and my eyes were REALLY wet. REALLY wet. This was a great story. I swear...
I loved it. But Lydia...I don't like her very much. Uh uh. Ben is a cute character, too. But Lydia was kinda...mean. But even though you explained it in the end, I still don't like her a lot.
Poor Ben...evil suicide.
Off to part 3!
Icing :P

that was such a sad story. It was written so beautifully. I think it might be one of the most emotional stories I've read in a long time, you're an amazing writer.

I was going to read a couple chapters and then quit. But I ended up reading through the whole story at once. You're evil. :)

I suppose it's so good because you're more willing to make your characters suffer than I am - although I think I'm pretty good at that too - and you pull it off so well. I'll save the third part of this story for later.

Three cheers for part two! What a dramatic, pummelling piece this was. Wow. I have to catch my breath. Ben was wonderful. Great job. :)

Wonderful ending! Lydia and Terry are finally beginning to regain what they had lost, thanks to Ben. Their son helped them get back what they'd been missing. *smiles with tears in her eyes*

Can't wait for part 3! :)

AQ

as always perfect. need part 3 now.

Well here is that review..... and damn is this one good. I can't wait to see the next part.

This is very possibly the most powerful story I have ever read...

God.......... ........... ......... wow ..........

all i can say is what a turn of events.

WHOA! He wouldn't actually do that to her--- would he???

outstanding!

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo........

emotional and unbeleivably intense god girl you are good

glad to see that robin has wings again