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Red Falling-Angel 2008-05-11 ch 3,	abusePowerful! Please write more!
James Rennfield 2007-10-06 ch 3,	abuseI really like this story and glad I found it. Other then few spelling and minor gramar it's great. And as for your concept of romantic marriages, and the fact that I've been married before, I think you're view might be a little jaded. But hey, whatever the reason I think it could (or rather I'm expecting it to) add a refreshing aspect to an already good story. Keep up the good work. Hope to see an update soon.
Materia-Blade 2006-09-15 ch 3,	abuseI liked it up to here. But your little teaser? ... Let me put it this way... i'll THINK about reading the next chapter... But not much... I loved it up to here though. Akane the pervert! Lol! Hilarious. And Ryoga learning from Kuno? Priceless! And the kiss scene at the end was to die for! But the whole dismember thing sucked. Another great Ra/Ak fic gone bad...
Silver Warrior 2006-08-26 ch 3,	abusesnickers I can ALMOST pity Ryouga. Almost.
Silver Warrior 2006-08-26 ch 2,	abuseheh heh heh. I almost pity Nabiki. Almost.
Silver Warrior 2006-08-26 ch 1,	abusethat... was funny. Please DO continue this if you can. It's funny!
encarna 2004-07-05 ch 3, anon.	abuseranma is plainly cruel, it feels very disturbing
Oyuki 2003-12-28 ch 3,	abusei like this! i really do! please have more soon! hahaha... sorry, i can't help but laugh at the situation you put these two in. more soon.
Raisins 2003-12-25 ch 2,	abusechasticious and honourful should be 'chaste and honourable'
Final-Fan 2003-12-23 ch 3, anon.	abuseUpon rereading this, I would like to clarify something from my earlier review: I didn't mean that he would beg her forgiveness on bended knee. He's pretty damn proud, and it's not really his style. But he'd shadow her, as I said, following her around and acting apologetic but trying to avoid actually apologizing until he thought she would accept it. At least, that's what I would write; as author of your own story, you get a lot more leeway than that, but I still say it's not nearly enough to justify "dismember you ... and feed your remains to the dogs."
Bio-Nic 2003-12-23 ch 3,	abuseha. cute story. though, you need to work on your flow slightly, it seems disjointed, just a little bit, but otherwise a very solid start to what I am sure will be a very good story. Please, continue
Final-Fan 2003-11-04 ch 3, anon.	abuseI am pretty well qualified as a prereader (i.e. excellent spelling and grammar), even if I DO say so myself; and ordinarily I would love to preread your stuff. But right now, I HAVE NO LIFE. Any time spent not on the job or at school or doing homework (such as reading fanfiction, like right now) is pretty much time taken out of my sleeping time. That or sacrificing my schoolwork. Right now it's both. God why am I still here? Seriously though... I've been concerned about your depiction of Ryoga for a while now -- he's not RETARDED, and he'd have to be to spend hours on end taking advice from Kuno and not figure out that he's not exactly a role model of dating techniques or a pillair of sanity for that matter. But what REALLY worries me is the scene with Ranma at the end here. No matter how desperate the two have been to deny their relationship, it could NEVER EVER reach that level of viciousness. Major OOC event. If he doesn't run after her RIGHT NOW and shadow her meekly until she accepts his apology, I don't know how I can keep reading.
Abbasi 2003-10-28 ch 3, anon.	abuseExcellent story but wats with Ranma being such a B!S"A$D Keep writing pliz
Peter Kim 2003-10-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseThere is many people who hates Ryouga and alot of fanfiction bash Ryouga. There is a fanfiction like this written by Lord Archive.
A. Kitana 2003-08-29 ch 2,	abusesniffle I thought i was the only one... Damn you ryouga!! wishing someone was sent after him in assas.. asiss... 'to kill a guy' atempts... well i'm not about to go on about all the different ways i hate the dude, besides yer reviews got it pretty well covered anyway. but i would like ta say ^-^ swet fic dude ya got the characters down pretty awesome and i like the twisting of things! keep it up!

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