Hi great story, well written.
The only thing I found wrong was you called Helios 'Elios' Keep up the great stories

Aww, this was so cute.

aww that was short and cute i liked it alot!

hey, that was pretty good. i don't really read much salior moon fics but i enjoyed that one.

i found your story from the link on your live journal account i hope you don't mind that i read your fic and also commented. haha and i wanted to be your friend on livejournal. your live journal is really cool, i love all the anime pictures.

well keep up the good work!

Great fic! Looking forward to your next one. ttyl.

I THOUGHT THAT WAS AWESOME!! i cried...i need more tissues. excuse me. ROCK ON!

Very nicely done! i love it! I just wish u would've written more to it...more chapters! that would have made ur story perfect! Anywho...chow!

Yay, that was good! I have read (and written) quite a lot of R/E fics, and this one is one of the best!

Nice...but it needs a follow-up. Not so good as a one-shot.
( P.S., Diana does not say 'kinda' she says 'rather')
Xp

sweet love :)

Yay! I finally got to read it. Took long enough, sorry. You are an excellant friend and writer. You are very talented. It's so descriptive.
~ Marissa
BFF

Kawaii!! ^o^