i like it can i hear more so are yuki and tohru going to be together in this one? if so let me know when you write next thanks
taka sohma

i like it can i hear more so are yuki and tohru going to be together in this one? if so let me know when you write next thanks
taka sohma

ITS GREAT NO CONTINUE WRITING!I DONT CARE HOW LONG THE CHAPTERS ARE AS LONG AS THEY ARE THERE!

its really coo, so far. update soon ok? ^_^Ja ne!

This is GREAT!
I luv it!!
It's wonderful that someone is writing about Yuki and Tohru instead of Kyou and Tohru!
Keep writing!!

Me likely this story! By the way, YOU MUST MAKE YUKI AND TOHRU KISS! I COMMAND IT!! ^-^ Just kidding. But I would like it if you make Yuki and Tohru kiss in later chappys.

Keep Writing! Keep Writing! KEEP WRITING! It's really cute so far!

so short. . but please continue soon!
i like this a lot . . i really do!
just hurry!

Way too short, not in-depth enough. Try extending it, perhaps combining Prolgue and Chapter 1.

ehh this has a lot of potential, I like it so far! I'd like you to continue it! and make the chapters longer too!

awww!! you are making up a whole new one?! i love it!!

i just started watching FRUIT BASKEt..and i adore it..this story is REALLY good ^_^

uve gotten me into it. ^^ so plz continue. i wanna see how this story will develop and quite impatient already ^^ hmm.. and btw very good! but plz next time, lengthen it.

eep!! this is great!! i hope you write more and make em longer ^~ b/c you write well hehe

You have just GOT to continue! I wanna know what happens!!