Awsome story, I believe you should continue on with this idea, because you could do so much with it. Just a thought. Other than that, extremely well written, though being the idea is sort of in its own way, complex, it would have been nicer if it was longer. Bravo though.

~Amaya Gin Kagome

wow. deep.

oh my god! that was awesome... piease add more. This could go into something rated r if you wanted to but i like it like it is. luv it!

Ummm, uh, that was kinda...interesting. But somewhat believable. Hopefully, there will be no continuations of this one. Um, yeah.

~NekoYasha~

That was a really beautiful story...for something written at 3 in the morning, extremely good and well written. I loved it...

Wow! Utterly nuts! Very well done, but too short in my opinion. You had great description!

Very good. There weren't enough angsty-scary-depressing parts about the whole youkai thing, and there really should be, and you did a wonderful job. ^^