It brings tears to my eyes no mather how many times i read this its realy sad and wonderfull storry at the same time. You did great job writing this I know for me it woud be hard to write it whit ending like this so great story realy good one.

Such bittersweet melancholy... Lovely. Really, very beautiful. It kind of strikes a chord in my soul, a tiny bit. Slightly tragic, but actually uplifting, in a way. *amused* The detail you speak of is Hikaru's father, correct?

Such a sad fic... Although it was really good... In the end, Keitaro ended up with Mutsumi... Good work!

that was quite touching and the not-so-well-hidden detail about Hikaru's real father was an interesting twist

Sad...so very sad...I loved it! At least in the end, Mutsumi and Keitaro were together. Actually almost made me shed a tear, ahahah.

I like melancholic stories, and this is a very good one! You reached the point! I think this story deserves a continue... Greetings!

Cool fic, though very melancholic (heh heh, melancholic sounds better than sad). Picked up on what detail by the way? Oh, you mean the fact that Keitaro is Hikaru-chan’s biological father? Well, that really wasn’t hard to figure out.

Emotionally charged, but very well written. It amazes me that there are so few Keitaro/Mutsumi fics (probably can count them all on one hand). I'm working on one, but it's taking forever to put it together. Really liked it.

So sad and emotional. It had an...interesting ending. Good hinting. Anyway, I really enjoyed this. I love it! Oh the pitfalls of love!

Not bad at all. Very few writers take on a Kei x Tsumi fic, and even fewer from this POV

I loved your fic^-^

perhaps you can continue this story by having keitaro returning to the past (Remember the episode in DS9 when the old jake sisko died so that he could have a second chance with his dad?) Do a repeat hear except with keitaro being the one who returns to the past and repairs it. otherwise this is a glorious story.

Hmm....beginning was indeed uninspired, but the fic picked up speed by the middle, and was quite interesting by the end ^_^

Keep writing!

Totally Sad. Yet Uplifting at the same time. Great Fic. No doubt about it. ^_^

Well...it certainty is different. This story goes from ordinary, to confusing, to sad, and just ends strangely. All in all, a so/so fic.