i luv it1! i cant beleive(sh*t i forgot how to spell) i forgot to review this!! that was so sweet!!

This story is one of my favorite fanfictions I've read that you wrote! I own all the WeiB Kruez episodes on tape (and even have some Gluhen on my computer) and couldn't appreciate more the obvious thought and care that went into a believable crossover between Aya/Ran and Makoto! Aya is just stand-offish enough to hold him in character and Makoto once again has been characterized in that way I am growing to love (tough, insightful, polite).

I was very tickled by the concept that both would tell each other about what they've been up to since parting. And yet, I can see Makoto telling the person she actually loves about what she's been doing. And while Aya may have been a bit more sketchy, I can see him telling her more later. Have you considered a sequel or quick epilogue to your story?

Once again, I was very happy with the story. (confidentially, I have a copy printed and in my car for those hold-ups in traffic ~_^ lol) Ja ne!

I LOVED IT. That was to cute. I LOVE RAN. Tee hee I am so weird. I loved the fluff!

I agree with you, Ran was out of character but I can picture him sweet and kind before the Takatori incident. The series this give us a glimpse of how he was like with his sister when Everything was fine. I like everything in the chapter but it kinda seem the story was moving in a fast pace. Maybe you wanted it like that or its just me ^_^ I wish you would continue with this. Its a nice piece of work but I respect you wishes for it to be a one shot. ^_^ Again you did a wonderful job.

See ya in the next story you make. ^_-

Keiko

I was so glad to see a story where Ran was the center male. I haven't many coupling with him. I must say that I haven't seen alot of WieB but Ran is my favorite. This was a great story.

That was great I liked it. And umm I wish I had tips to give but I don't because really I don't see anything that needs improvement. Its such a great story. Good job. Well Bye! ^^

OMG Makoto! That was sooo kawaii!! teehee* i loved it! i liked how kotochan and Ran were able to talk able what they did (fighting-wise) with each other..it showed how deep their relationship was! Gya, youre too damned good.

:: round of a appluse :: that was wonderful! I absolutely loved it! i haven't seen any of these around...i think. it was cute and sweet. sorry it took me so long to review. my electricity went out....grrrrr....so i had to wait for a while. thanks for the email telling me about it! keep up the great work and have a great day!


love blue!



ps: i had a fight with rocks and they won...

I love this story, love the Aya/Mako fluff. He's really OOC but I've never seen a romance when he actually is. Too bad this is only a one shot. I like the way you established everything in only one chapter. I know I'll never be able to write a one chapter fic, too restrictive. I got a new e-mail address since I don't have AOL anymore (DSL!) It's Chibi Sarien@netscape.net I'm pretty sure that's it. I'll e-mail you the next chapter of Rhapsody as soon as I'm able. School has brought many sleepless nights.
I love your stories (more!!) and if possible I'd like to use some on my fanfiction website (I deleted my anime one, too much work- besides I love fanfiction). The address is
http://www.angelfire.com/anime4/sailoremerald/waters.html
It's not open yet (didn't connect it to the splash) and I haven't been putting up any other author's fanfiction. You'd be the first. ^__^ Keep the wonderfull stories coming, k?

Improvements?
All I see is quality work...that's all I ever see of you. I doubt you could make improvments.
And now that I've boosted your ego...great story...^_^

Woo Hoo! Ran/Mako! Haven't seen one of these in a while, nice job! Are you planning on doing any more with them as main characters?

^__________________^ I liked it a lot! Are you going to have Makoto tell him about being the Sailor Scout? Are you going to introduce anyone else? It's REALLY interesting so far. Please continue. ~*~ Lady Light