 Daidaiiro-chan 2006-04-25 . chapter 7You know, I've tried to start this story several times, but always ended up getting distracted by something else. And I must say, so far this is shaping up to be very, very good!
Usually I don't review (yes, I'm one of those evil people that just adds you to Favorites and Story Alert without saying anything) but you managed to get a reaction out of me. And, inexplicably, I felt the urge to share it.
Last chapter, I was wondering who would die. This chapter, I found out... and I laughed. >:) I'm not sure why... Maybe I'm just going insane. That's probably it, actually.
What else to say? You understand grammar. I worship anyone who has good grammar and a good plot and good writing. Which would be you. So just know that you are... umm... worshipped. (That's a bit scary, really. Well, I, for one, would be scared if I knew someone worshipped me. But maybe you're not.)
I was just looking through your reviews and saw that someone said, "BLOODY HELL! THIS IS HORRIBLE!... FIX YOUR CHARACTERS!"
I would like to ask that person what, exactly, is wrong with the characters. I think that they may be a tiny bit OOC, but then again, the only writing in which they are completely in character is that of the Harry Potter books by J.K.Rowling.
By the way, I grinned when I got to "Harry, having grown accustomed to this thanks to Hermione's monthly mood swings..." I was wondering what her problem was in the earlier chapters! ;)
Anyway, as you might have noticed I tend to ramble on for a very long time when I do write a review. Sometimes I even stray onto a topic that doesn't have anything to do with the story itself, but that's just what my writing's like. I hope you don't mind.
And that's that. I could probably go on for a long time, but I'll end this now.
Ta.
~Daidaiiro-chan |
 kizna2 2004-07-22 . chapter 25Great story, I could have sworn that I have already read this before. I might have read it a long time ago. Anyway this is a wonderful story, and I hope that you will not only keep it that way, but also update soon. |