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Rori Potter
2009-08-29 . chapter 25
Great. Update soon.
Rori Potter
2009-08-11 . chapter 9
Great.
yumi2482
2008-10-20 . chapter 25
awesome
Fireburst
2007-03-16 . chapter 25
This story is...wow...I really like it. Hope you update soon!!
MorbidlyDisturbed
2006-07-18 . chapter 25
Oh god, you had to leave it at that??!?
Daidaiiro-chan
2006-04-25 . chapter 7
You know, I've tried to start this story several times, but always ended up getting distracted by something else. And I must say, so far this is shaping up to be very, very good!

Usually I don't review (yes, I'm one of those evil people that just adds you to Favorites and Story Alert without saying anything) but you managed to get a reaction out of me. And, inexplicably, I felt the urge to share it.

Last chapter, I was wondering who would die. This chapter, I found out... and I laughed. >:) I'm not sure why... Maybe I'm just going insane. That's probably it, actually.

What else to say? You understand grammar. I worship anyone who has good grammar and a good plot and good writing. Which would be you. So just know that you are... umm... worshipped. (That's a bit scary, really. Well, I, for one, would be scared if I knew someone worshipped me. But maybe you're not.)

I was just looking through your reviews and saw that someone said, "BLOODY HELL! THIS IS HORRIBLE!... FIX YOUR CHARACTERS!"
I would like to ask that person what, exactly, is wrong with the characters. I think that they may be a tiny bit OOC, but then again, the only writing in which they are completely in character is that of the Harry Potter books by J.K.Rowling.

By the way, I grinned when I got to "Harry, having grown accustomed to this thanks to Hermione's monthly mood swings..." I was wondering what her problem was in the earlier chapters! ;)

Anyway, as you might have noticed I tend to ramble on for a very long time when I do write a review. Sometimes I even stray onto a topic that doesn't have anything to do with the story itself, but that's just what my writing's like. I hope you don't mind.

And that's that. I could probably go on for a long time, but I'll end this now.

Ta.

~Daidaiiro-chan
Ktoddhim
2005-12-14 . chapter 25
Hi,
I love your story!! If you need a beta or help, feel free to email me.

Katy
Lostpharoah
2005-09-15 . chapter 2
I truly love this story, one of the best of this popular genre. Great work!
cookie gestapo
2005-09-08 . chapter 25
And you haven't updated why again?
SILVERFOX KTREVA
2005-08-25 . chapter 25
thi is a great story please continue
cynosure the hierophant 2
2005-04-26 . chapter 7
When Ron is listing people that care about Harry, why does he say Ginny's name? You just had Harry recalling her death. You really should fix that.+
MiakaChan5
2005-01-29 . chapter 25
wow i seem to be reviewing a lot lately. but anyway good work and i can't wait to read more.
kizna2
2004-07-22 . chapter 25
Great story, I could have sworn that I have already read this before. I might have read it a long time ago. Anyway this is a wonderful story, and I hope that you will not only keep it that way, but also update soon.
RandomnessDotCom
2004-06-30 . chapter 25
u better update soon.. i wanna kno whats gonna happen!!.. by the way... i like ur story
Starr Light1
2004-06-19 . chapter 25
is harry actually allowed to stay in the tower anymore? anyway im totally excited that you updated and i hope that the next chapter will be up soon! the only mistake that i caught technical writing wise that i stopped and really noticed was towards the end you wrote weaved and im nearly certain that its wove. i like that harry can see his own behavior as stupid when it is. how wise is it to allow harry to keep the knife? cutting is an addiction not just an attempt at suicide and its really important that all the fun little cutting tools are taking away and thrown out if the habit is to be kicked. maybe severus could put a spell onit so that it cant cut harry?
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