Awesome story and very nice writing style. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more from you.

~K

I really liked your story. It had lots of twists and turn to keep my eyes glued to the screen. The only thing I didn't like was the ending. It was too flat for me. I would have liked more of a conclusion. Instead it was as though you just quit writing. Overall, a great story.

update soon

love it love it a lot! great story! is there a sequel?

Great story! What all happened to them! Horrible! Great story!

Good story! I really enjoyed it!

Wow! I loved your story! It is action packed yet sweet at the same time. You did a fantastic job! thanks for a great read!

I lOVE IT SO FAR GREAT JOB!

Hiya...you'll prolly remember me under a different name...just checking in...story's progressed awesomely...been wondering how you are and stuff...regret having lost contact all those years ago but oh well...keep up the good work...you really have a knack for writing...but then again that's prolly why you're studying journalism rofl

Greetz from Dion the Talking Bush of Stormwind

omg, it's so funny, the author's not-ish thing at the end of this chapter saying the pick-up schedule that sirius and remus follow xD. It's so... domestic compared to the rest of the story ROFLMAO, awesomeness so far. I really like it, but my only question is how did moony come in like that so quickly?

Its really good! You should write more fanfics!

Good story idea; i wouldn't be able to tell English wasn't your first or second language if you didn't say.

hmm...i wonder if ther is going to be a sequel? i shld go check... but not now.. tmr maybe.. horrible headache.. now i'm just crapping.. fine...

anw, great story! pls write more!

got continue??

Excellant! Sirius & Remus are fantastic characters, and I love stories where Sirius doesn't die (as he did in canon). You did a really good job with the action and keeping up the tension. I love how Remus and Harry are both more agressive in takin action. The scene where they are captured by the Ministry and Moody gets Harry is so good. Also, V's torture of Sirius and Harry's saving of his sanity. PLEASE, I'm begging for a sequel. Or more fics by you at all. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.