 Reviewer 9/30/11 . chapter 1 AAAWWWWW! I love it! Goten is so cutie...(and so is gohan)
-Thanks:) |
 ElricKeyblade 5/1/10 . chapter 1WHOOT! I absolutely LOVE Gohan/Goten brotherly love stories, but it's so hard to find any that are as good as this one! Amazing- and I absolutely loved how you included a little "Goten-meets-Trunks" thing in there too (I am currently searching for those, with no luck so far). Great job with this! bd |
 Lychee Green Tea 1/31/09 . chapter 1THE most adorable Gohan and Goten fic! Awesome one-shot, as usual.
Take care,
LGT |
 Viridian 5/15/07 . chapter 1Fluff of the very first order! I loved the story; oddly enough, it moved me to tears too. |
 Rose Unspindle 7/31/06 . chapter 1Aw! So Kawaii! |
 Samara-chan 2/1/05 . chapter 1*GASP* That was so *AMAZINGLY* adorable... I love Gohan and Goten fics so much! You are so good at writing them. *sniffles* |
 Garowyn 1/7/05 . chapter 1So sweet! I love it! Great work. |
 Celestial Thunder Dragon 8/28/04 . chapter 1 Hey Candyland! What's up? I know I'm keeping track on your other story, "Tears of the Sea", so I decided to drop in and check out your other stories. ;) After reading "God Must've Spent A Little More Time On You", I absolutely loved it! The way you portrayed Gohan and Goten's brotherly relationship is well done and adorable! Also, the song really suits the mood! It's actually one of my favorite *NSync songs since I'm a fan of the group. :) Anyway, awesome writing once again! Great job! |
 beeswax 6/13/04 . chapter 1 aw! i loved it! i especially loved the part when Gohan went to Goten's room to scare the "monsters"! so cute! |
 Trugeta 5/28/04 . chapter 1This story was very good! They should have shown this in the series! Write more! |
 shortstack1113 3/28/04 . chapter 1Aw! I just love Goten. He is THE best DBZ charactor EVER! Please write more fics like this! *squeezes Goten really tightly in a hug*Gohan is the best Big brother ever. I wish mine was so good to me. 10 out of 10! |
 Konneko-chan 3/21/04 . chapter 1i love it! you're really good at one-shots _ the ending is perfect, too...your story "Once Upon a Chibi" makes a perfect follow-up for this one because of the whole "Gohan didn't get a chilhood" thing, even though i don't think you meant it to be...well done! . |
 GenieT 1/18/04 . chapter 1AW! that was so superduper kawaii! (superduper! *im a dork*) |
 Angel35 11/6/03 . chapter 1This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I think you should add more chapters becuase this story is just to good to be one chapter. Anyway keep up the great work _ |
 JohnnyMakesNuts 9/13/03 . chapter 1AW! TOO CUTE! This was SO perfect! I especially liked how you went through when Goten was born to when hewas a lil 6 year old. Man, this was just superb! I mean, they were all so in character! YOUR AN INCREDIBLE AUTHOR! I wish I could write like you! A GAZZILLION STARS! Keep writing, you rock! |