alright is was sweet i think the is one of the best malik tea fanfics out there and there are so few its just so sad it such a good couple plz update

this is a good story! it's a pity Kaiba died. i'm glad you started using paragraphs, they make the story easier to read. ^-^.

I loved it! Keep up the great work.

I loved it. I used to be called Joey's girl, but changed the name. I really love your stories, but I'm in class so I'm reviewing for one.

well its good need to wrap it up though and just let me shoot that so called fahter in the head or somthing its just mewan what he did.

Later

stevie

Oh! Shiznit!He's back!(Looks at the dad) I thought I killed you bastard!(While beating the living bejeebus out of him) Great job Ferretgirl!

AW!So sweet...but yet sad! It's great! I love it!Love your story!

YAY!The beach!Nothing bad happens at the beach!Awesome work!

(Tears up) Oh God! Not Kaiba! Not kaiba! Not Kaiba! (Gets drug away to the looney bin cause she keeps repeating not Kaiba) Great jog...As always!

Oh for the love of cheese! Don't these morons ever go away?! Anyway, as always, great job!

Oh my goodness! She finally gets over the thing...and something else is going to happen?! Stupid dumb bastards in suits! Awesome work!1

Oh Gosh! Not them again! They all need to die like the nasty father! (Stabs every bad person in the fic) Muahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!Please don't make fun of me when you read this review! Great fic!

My goodness! These jack BLEEPS are never going to leave her alone...are they? Great story!

Yay!Mai's there! Everything will be cool now...right? Am I right? She kicks serious butt, so maybe that will help! ?ILOVETHISTORY!Anyway, got2go!Love ya sis!

Muahahahahahahahaha-(covers her mouth) Not my evil laugh again! Anyway, LOVED IT!