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| Whatev3691 2006-02-23 ch 19,  | abusecome on this story is really great and original! you need to update again! |
| Tina 2005-10-14 ch 19, anon. | abuselove it! plz more!! and update soon!! |
| Oozaru Angel 2005-05-27 ch 19, | abuseIt's not really terrible! Update it soon or waves upon waves of Kimlia Bugs will eat your toes! |
| Dark-Bulma69 2005-05-23 ch 19, | abusePlease! Another Chappy PLEASE! |
| Nessa 2005-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseMy god. *Must not barf, must not barf* Please note : THIS IS A *FLAME*. You bad, bad author. They are so out-of-carachter only the names gave me any sort of clue as to what CONTINUUM this story was from. This is THE most pathetic peice of Dbz fic I have yet come across. And I have Been reading DBZ fic's for MONTHS. Pathetic! Oh You should REALLY google OFUD (Official Fanfiction University of Dragonball z) Besides being an excellent fic. You might actually learn something about what NOT to write. You disgust me. The 'veggie-chan' thing worst of all. Can you not think of ANYTHING more creative? And less likely to make me want to scrub my eyes with bleach?! He is VEGETA the Saiya-jin PRINCE. Who loathes Freiza with all his heart.( Ie, would NOT stoop to calling him a 'Homosexual' - no matter how true this may be.) He is a Evil Malicious DESTROYER of ENTIRE SPECIES. He does not take friggin VACATIONS! By the way, if Goku had truly stayed with the Saiya-jin race (as you indicated) then he would NOT be happy-go-lucky as you see him in the show. He would be a Die-Hard MONSTER like Vegeta. And would run around calling said Saiya-jin Prince 'My PRINCE' all the time. Please remove this story. It would cut bleach sales in half. |
| Small Teeth 2005-04-02 ch 19, | abuseWow!! I love this fic! It is awesome! Update soon! |
| mimschi 2005-03-30 ch 19, | abusesimply GREAT! |
| NamirKitten 2005-03-18 ch 18, | abuseI love it. I can't wait to see what happens. Keep it comeing. ::Do a Cherr:: GO AUTHOR! |
| mimschi 2005-03-17 ch 18, | abuseits a pretty cool story! i liked reading it so far! |
| Dark-Bulma69 2003-12-09 ch 1, | abuseHey! Did you give up on this fic?!?! Come on dont do this to us!! We faithful readers still want to know what happens! HELLO!! WAKE UP! Dont be full of your self you can do it! It dosent take that much to write a new chap.! Sometimes it takes 2 or 3 times going over the fic to get the inspiration going but you can do it! Come on! PLEASE! Do it for your faithful readers! Do it for your self! PLEASE! I realy want to know what happens! Well its up to you! What ever you do...I cant make you do any thing...All I can do is encourage you...And thats what im trying to do! PLEASE! The choice is yours I hope you make the right one! I hope to hear from you soon! Love Dark_Bulma69 (Stacey) |
| En Satsu Koku Ryuu Ha 2003-09-03 ch 17, | abuseThis is very good, I hope u update soon! Keep up the good work. :) |
| PrincessBV 2003-08-14 ch 16, | abuseplez rewrite another chapter! i luv ur story and i'd love it if u continued wit ur story! its really good! later days |
| PrincessBV 2003-07-21 ch 17, | abuseomg! please rewrite it! ur story is so good! i need to read the next chapter! its addictive!! |
| Dark-Bulma69 2003-07-12 ch 17, | abuseHey! I really like your fic's! Thats too bad about chap. 17 thou!...O-Well I can wait it wont kill me... Hope to hear from u soon! |
| me 2003-07-04 ch 16, anon. | abusehehehe...it was funny like always! can't wait for the next chp.! |