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OptimusxElita4ever
2007-07-21 . chapter 8
Was it Magnus, Roddi, or someone else entirely? Come on! You have updated in years! Can you please update?
OptimusxElita4ever
2007-07-20 . chapter 7
Whoops indeed. Oh-ho, they were playing Twister, I thought...you don't wanna know. Oh dear, what'll happen to Magnus?
OptimusxElita4ever
2007-07-20 . chapter 6
*looks, barfs, then faints* Funny though. XD
OptimusxElita4ever
2007-07-20 . chapter 5
Well, Optimus DID tell him to cart his @$$ to his office. WOOT, go Blurr! How many other mech-prints will be embedded in Magnus's wall before the fic ends? O.O ;)
OptimusxElita4ever
2007-07-20 . chapter 4
Oh, Optimus, you rat. XD What'll happen when Rodimus sees the real Arcee, and how will Magnus explain the impending torture to come? *pause* ? 0o
OptimusxElita4ever
2007-07-20 . chapter 3
Lol, if Rodimus switched Optimus' optic plates for red ones he would be...Scourge the Nemesis Prime! *cue lightning and thuder affects* **shudders** Well, those are the two names for him, take your pick. XP Poor Roddi...
OptimusxElita4ever
2007-07-20 . chapter 2
He was cut off by the most terrifying, the most horrifying, the most gruesome, and nightmare-inducing roar I've ever heard. It's Optimus. Oh joy.

That cracked me up! XD
Gelendra
2007-03-25 . chapter 1
Hahaha! So far this story is good. I'm kinda new to the whole Transformers world (I watched the anniversary release of the movie, and got hooked) but I seriously love it. I have seen a couple of fics about Rodimus/Optimus prank wars, though this is the first non one-shot. I take it Hot Rod pulled a prank or two in the series, lol. Well, gonna keep reading... and laughing.
Kim Kinne
2006-07-07 . chapter 8
LOL!

More Please!
shadow dragon04
2005-11-09 . chapter 8
hoo hoo this is so funny optimus is so scary (shudders)he is really evil when it comes to payback please write the next chapter soon please
Veja
2005-09-22 . chapter 8
MAGNIFICENT (REPEAT 24 TIMES). JUST GREAT. UPDATE SOON.
Kim Kinne
2005-06-11 . chapter 8
more please
Kevona
2004-07-03 . chapter 8
Oh, sweet, sweet Primus. I scared my cats, my husband, and my stuffed teddy bear with how long and hard I was absolutely HOWLING with laughter while reading this. You are a comic genius, and I salute you; and I thank Koontah for pointing this out to me - with adequate warnings about not eating or drinking while reading. ;)

Kevona
ckret2, again
2004-06-15 . chapter 8
HAH! Now I KNOW you're alive! You posted an Author's Note on June 6!!

Well, I guess it's okay, take your time. Some time ago, I went, what, six months without updating? And I'm not much better now. Still, it's been a year... I'll wait for the next chapter. But, just so you know, I tend to annoy the ** out of people who don't update. No offense, I've treated ZimmyDoom99 and Opalescent Tear the same. And several other people I can't remember. Just update someday, okay? And if this fic IS dead, tell us instead of letting us hang.

Anywho, still a great, hilarious fic. I think you overdid it a bit with the Twister thing. You coulda cut out bits. But the first time I read it, you really had me going. I thought they were actually doing IT. Yay to Prime-dissing. We all know he isn't as nice as he seems. Heh.

~ckret2
T.L. Arens
2004-03-18 . chapter 8
I can swear by whatever is holy this is the funniest story I have ever read. I laughed until my cheeks, jaw and stomach hurt!! This isn't a story-it's a gem!!
The only drawback was chapter six, but then, sexual humor has always escaped me, so it might be funnier for someone else. other than that, I LOVED the way the characters were portrayed and the situations they were placed in! and I especially LOVED how eventually Optimus came out on top ;) (love that mech!!)
I wish there was more . . . could always use more of such brilliant work!
*flips through mail list* now who could I recommend this to?
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