Beautiful! Well written! Eagerly awaiting next chapter.

Don’t cause mass panic, except on Tuesdays
I've always hated Tuesdays for some reason.

i suppose ur rite...but i still think of artemis as the smarter one...it may have something to do with my obsession...lol...i really like ur story! itz fantastic! plz continue!

*luffs Miadevil* OK, actually, that was kinda gross, so how about.. *hugs Miadevil* Love the story, love everything. I just don't love how you have more average reviews than me. *sulks* But then, your story's really good. I just have one teeny, eeny thing to say. MORE!!! And also, MORE DETAILS!!! I know it may seem hard, but I go over my stuff ten times. If you use Microsoft Word, I strongly suggest that you get it to go to 4 pages, single space. And by the way, don't look. *glomps Artemis Fowl, complete with manuscript of story*

Told ya not to look!

Ohhhhh... I was so terrified of a Mary Sue for a moment in this story, but obviously someone who is blind and retarded has a couple *major* flaws. Very creepy, very plotty, very GOOOD.

OKE DOKE!!!!!!!!!!!

OKE DOKE!!!!!!!!!!!1

Yup, that answers it. Your story is very well thought out. Write more soon!

I really like this story. Your writing was consistently good, though the first two chapters had rather confusing tenses. Perhaps using past tense would make it easier for readers.

You also have a plausible plotline. The genetic mutation part is a simply ingenuous concept. Your description of the girl was exquisitely creepy. But I don't understand why anyone would want to create cross-breeds, or why Artemis would actually want to help. Perhaps you could answer that in your next chapter? I'm looking forward to it.

PGF

Yay! *prances around* I love the humour! The disguise was hilarious. =D As was the LEP's "policy"...

Artemis is talking to himself, which scares me. Miss Mary Sue also scares me, just because she's a Mary Sue, but you know she's a Mary Sue, so that's okay.

Ignore my rambling, I tend to be rather floaty sometimes. Good fanfic does that to me. *grin* I already have this on my favourites list, so I can't add it again. I shall have to show my appreciation another way...

SWOOTY!

--Kitty

oooo supenceful come on next chappy

Ha, this is brilliant! I would have added it to my favorites list instantly, except I like to wait until a few chapters are up to make sure its going to be good. I was sceptical about the autopsy lab, until I read your A/N. This is written wonderfully. I'm a big fan of present tense, so I loved the beginning of the first chapter. However, it did remind me a lot of the beginning of Andromeda Strain (Michael Chrichton). I don't know if you've read the book, but if you hadn't, I recommend reading the very first page and maybe rewording your story a tiny bit. I do love it, and it caatches the reader's attention very well, but in real life it might be considered plaigerism or something. I don't know, I'm not a lawyer. I'm not a great writer either, so (obviously) I'm really fishing for something to critique you on here :)

I love the charicterisation of Artemis during the almost-autopsy, it made him very real. The only time Artemis wasn't perfectly perfect (in my very humble opinion) was when he said 'my God, Juliet'. I can't see Artemis saying that. Or I can, but with some difficulty.

Love the latin at the beginning (that's another thing I'm a big fan of, I know a small amount of latin, and I hope to study it when I'm older) and I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter... If the rest are as good as the first two, I can guarantee you'll be on my favs list.

Random dead bodies, hehe. That's rather amusing. Anyways, I love this story!

good story...but if he is a super genius...why did u say that foaly was the smartest person in the world? i mean...if was fowl that discovered how to escape the time-stop...wasn't it? i do like the story a lot and i hope you continue

i really like this story! i think it is really good! there are a few problems though...i believe kitty mentioned the glasses one...and then when u started to talk about the contacts...i got a bit confused...but i think i understand...u could just have him wear paragon...and i dun think artemis fowl will ever be a "normal" boy...and quit the criminal activities