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Emiliana Keladry 2008-02-28 . chapter 1
Wow. This was really good! I like the fact that Molly thought she was having a girl and got Ron. Lol! Excellent work!

Emma
Elolinone 2006-07-05 . chapter 1
I really lived this story!
Bagge 2006-02-09 . chapter 1
Nice story about a meeting that most certinly took place. Lily was adorable with her nervousness. Molly is the kind spirit we know. I really enjoyed the part with Ginny. I suppose Ron came as a bit of a dissapointment, then. But they obviously kept trying.
ivoryeggplant 2005-12-07 . chapter 1
Ooh, very nice fic. Creative and original.

I only wish it was longer. You know, like add in James reaction and such. But still, really good! keep writing!
????????? 2005-04-16 . chapter 1
this was a ratin 8 in a scale of 1-10
Monaivendork 2004-12-13 . chapter 1
That's sweet.
Poor Molly.
She was so convinced she would have a girl and then Ron just has to come around. lol
But we love him anyway.
You chould make a sequal(sp?), somehow.
Luv Paddy's Gurl
Lady LifeCharm 2004-03-14 . chapter 1
oh, what a wonderful story! I've never read anything like it, it's just utterly fantastic! Great work.
--bri
Jillian Ryn 2003-12-01 . chapter 1
I loved this story. Brilliant idea, so very creative. I love the idea of them meeting. Wonderful job. You are an amazing writter!
xMadgirlx 2003-11-23 . chapter 1
Thanks for reviewing my fic!

This fic is brillaint!
Evilgrinch 2003-10-17 . chapter 1
Totally original. Well done.
Cinnamon Sunrise 2003-10-06 . chapter 1
that was cute! really! i liked that lily wasn't perfect like some authors make her to be. that molly weasley is such a doll! the only thing that made me cringe was the mention of arabella -- you see, it's a peeve of mine when authors mention arabella figg as "marauder generation" age. she's kinda old...heh! i've never read anything quite like this story, good ideas! keep writing and update soon, if you plan on adding more, that is!
Emlyn 2003-10-01 . chapter 1
OOh! Now that was just good, plain and simple good! Are you gonna continue it? I'd like to see James's reaction after Lily feels so bad.
Bladefanatic 2003-09-09 . chapter 1
I truly like this story! I love that Molly and Lily met each other, and they are both carring the children that will grow up and become best friends!

I think it is very funny that she is calling Ron "
"Ginny" Poor woman it was probably a let down to get another boy ::hee hee::

Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Legofodopip 2003-09-07 . chapter 1
This was very nicely written. I enjoyed it immensley. Keep writing.
Trinity Day 2003-08-26 . chapter 1
I liked this story. I liked how Lily was telling Molly about her insecurities and worries about the upcoming pregnancy and Molly was doing her best to comfort her. (It was, actually, oddly like my own story, "Change", in that respect, at least.) What I didn't like was the listing of friends, said friends' marital and pregnancy status. I thoguht it was, as I already said, too much of a list, and it didn't add anything to the story. The story would, in my opinion, have been much better without that little part.
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