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| hermit hideaway 2008-07-13 ch 51,  | abuseThis story is amazing. I think this is the first story I've ever read, and I've read A LOT, that actually contains and original character that I did like. In fact, Kira was amazing in this story. I can't say I didn't wish to see a little diversion from the Stargate story line every once and awhile, but in the end the author knows best. Plus as much as I might have liked to see something develop between Kira and Daniel it just was never right. Well great job and I'll just have to go check your author's page to see what else you have written. |
| ArafelSedai 2008-07-09 ch 50, | abuseVery nicely done my dear...very nice indeed. Even knowing the outcome of Meridian and all about Ascencion; I was caught up in Kira's grief. Bravissimo |
| ArafelSedai 2008-07-09 ch 46, | abuseWell it is about time... I was wondering if you were gonna get her hired by the CIA and THEN stumble across SGC... |
| ArafelSedai 2008-07-09 ch 43, | abuseHahahahaahaha... Oh Dear God! That was funny! By meer moments. Sweet irony! |
| ArafelSedai 2008-07-09 ch 39, | abuseOne word... Cool! |
| ArafelSedai 2008-07-09 ch 38, | abuse? Ok, Didn't Kira find this stuff about Daniel when she was... ahem...rather inebriated? Epiphany? |
| ArafelSedai 2008-07-09 ch 36, | abuseYes, yes... I do realize that I am stumbling across this saga a bit late (Ok like 2008 late), but I feel compelled to keep posting reviews. You did do the work... and I am after all just now reading it... and I figured it was only polite and nice to let you know that it may be an older post... but it is still darned good! Wizard of OZ putt putt...Capital CHEESE. hahahahah |
| ArafelSedai 2008-07-09 ch 32, | abuseThis was hilarious...and after an unfortunate July 4th party where I partook of far too much wine (always fill your own glass; never just let it be filled) I can so commisserate with poor Kira. (Oh and she will do it again... I should know better at my age... so yeah, she will do it again...hahahah) Great chapter; I can't wait until some small particle of memory surfaces for her later... |
| ArafelSedai 2008-07-04 ch 19, | abuseGood catch on the name (rank has its privleges) and I happen to agree with you on the basic timing of "other" said feelings between them. Now...on to 17.5 |
| ArafelSedai 2008-07-04 ch 16, | abuseI have to admit... I slept...and dealt with my kids, so I was not prepared (despite your warning) for the "Kree" thing to be brought up like it was. To Funny! As soon as Stefan came running up I started laughing. Oh...good choices on the music too. Since, I hate to run as well I'll have to remember that for our next physicals/PT stuff. HAHAHAHAHAHa |
| ArafelSedai 2008-07-03 ch 14, | abuseKree! That is great... Good chapter too. Nice way to segway into bringing along Jacob. I can just see his "you gotta be kidding me" look in a fancy coffee shop. |
| ArafelSedai 2008-07-03 ch 9, | abuseYes since you asked... this was very funny! Very in character for all involved... ;-) |
| ArafelSedai 2008-07-03 ch 8, | abuseOk since you are at the end of your Season one I will pause and give you a big thumbs up before continuing onto the rest... I just love these vingettes! (kudos on the dig in Israel and your stint in Antarctica by the way..very cool) I just love the way Kira thinks. I have this huge grin on my face and my coworkers are giving me nervous glances hahaha. Oh, and I am seriously craving my double Americano right now.. which (no kidding) happens to be my absolute favorite! Barista's rock... |
| Eternal Density 2008-05-19 ch 46, | abuseyes, i am grinning! |
| Inarae 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseI used to read this on your website--ran across it here and decided to add it to my faves. Really, really awesome story. Thanks a million for writing and sharing. |