first, i love kira, she's awesome and i wish she was an actual character in the SG cast, that could be fun, and the interaction between her and daniel through their letters was great

one thing to pick on, kira claimed that she didn't have daniel's email address but in previous chapteres daniel told her to email her paper to him and i'm going to guess she went through with that, so how does she not have the email address? i think there ere a few other continuity things to pick at and at one point, not in this chapter but in a previous one, you spelled ccademy like that rather than academy

adoring this story! please please please update the sequel soon!

What an absolutely wonderful story! It kept me up until WAY past my bedtime for three nights in a row as I read. I know with all the reviews, this is just another one. But I wanted you to know exactly how much I enjoyed Kira's friendship with Daniel.

When the story first began, I was a bit concerned that Kira might turn into a Mary Sue. I was so happy to find out she didn't. Her sometimes hilarious, sometimes not encounters with our favorite SG team made for such wonderful reading that I literally could barely put the story down!

That said, I look forward to anything else you write! :)

Gotta say, that this is a pretty great story! Can't wait to finish reading the rest of it!

Btw, what are the names of the songs on the CD Kira was listening to? I would really love to look them all up on Spotify ya know...

Simply brilliant.

I must say, whenever I want to read something, but nothing catches my eye, I am always able to come back and still love this story.

I knew that the last chapters would end in Daniel's death...but it was still abrupt. I expected her to get settled at least...I love her and I love Daniel and I love how you write it. Extremely well done...:)

Another one I had completely forgotten about! I started it, thinking "Wait, huh? It's KIRA? WTH? Did I miss something?" Then I continue to read and "whew!" and giggle.

Wonderful! And I have to admit to having used that song to get down a seemingly crooked hallway or stairway or two after an evening of over-indulgence...LOL!

Of COURSE she did! Who wouldn't?

There are time when I think you've looked into my life and captured some of my essence in this story. I have TOTALLY been in one of those moods. I have been in the situation where I told people to not worry about making a big deal about something and then completely regretting that sentiment later.

Very nicely written.

MA

I loved this one, but I often wondered if "Broca Divide" didn't actually start the fire for Jack, but this one made it a bit more real to him. The idea of being married to her surprised him at a molecular level, I think, and nudged the crack open significantly.

I love this conversation.

It's funny. I didn't remember that part about Ritalin and coffee. But recently, my pediatrician and a school psychologist suggested that I give my son a cup of coffee in the mornings before school. "To even him out."

This was a great chappy! I loved Jack's yes-I-know-words-like... asides. And the whole ribbing Daniel about Kira's crush. Nicely done!

MA

One of the most memorable parts of this series, to me, has been "Kree". I still think of Kira every time I hear the word "Kree!" on one of the old episodes. And it brings a smile to my face, every time.

ROFLMAO! LOVED "Yes, SIR! Colonel Dad, sir!" and the description of receiving the hug from Daniel (fantasy fodder, indeed!)

MA

I don't know if I ever said this before but Kira's adoration of "Colonel Jack" and Daniel are SO great! I would be as flustered as she and I could hear Stephan's reaction to seeing Jack in uniform...Good LORD! That man is HANDSOME!

LOL! I had a crush on RDA as MacGyver when I was in high school, even though he was old enough to date my mother and he is THE reason I started watching SG1 in the first place. As the series progressed, I developed crushes on Daniel and Teal'C as well, but it's really hard to stop that pitter-pat of my heart when it comes to Jack O'Neill. And you describe him (those EYES) TO A TEE!

I know I've read this before and I may be repeating myself, but am LOVING IT as much this time as the first time!

MA