Gotta say, that this is a pretty great story! Can't wait to finish reading the rest of it!

Btw, what are the names of the songs on the CD Kira was listening to? I would really love to look them all up on Spotify ya know...

Simply brilliant.

I must say, whenever I want to read something, but nothing catches my eye, I am always able to come back and still love this story.

I knew that the last chapters would end in Daniel's death...but it was still abrupt. I expected her to get settled at least...I love her and I love Daniel and I love how you write it. Extremely well done...:)

Another one I had completely forgotten about! I started it, thinking "Wait, huh? It's KIRA? WTH? Did I miss something?" Then I continue to read and "whew!" and giggle.

Wonderful! And I have to admit to having used that song to get down a seemingly crooked hallway or stairway or two after an evening of over-indulgence...LOL!

Of COURSE she did! Who wouldn't?

There are time when I think you've looked into my life and captured some of my essence in this story. I have TOTALLY been in one of those moods. I have been in the situation where I told people to not worry about making a big deal about something and then completely regretting that sentiment later.

Very nicely written.

MA

I loved this one, but I often wondered if "Broca Divide" didn't actually start the fire for Jack, but this one made it a bit more real to him. The idea of being married to her surprised him at a molecular level, I think, and nudged the crack open significantly.

I love this conversation.

It's funny. I didn't remember that part about Ritalin and coffee. But recently, my pediatrician and a school psychologist suggested that I give my son a cup of coffee in the mornings before school. "To even him out."

This was a great chappy! I loved Jack's yes-I-know-words-like... asides. And the whole ribbing Daniel about Kira's crush. Nicely done!

MA

One of the most memorable parts of this series, to me, has been "Kree". I still think of Kira every time I hear the word "Kree!" on one of the old episodes. And it brings a smile to my face, every time.

ROFLMAO! LOVED "Yes, SIR! Colonel Dad, sir!" and the description of receiving the hug from Daniel (fantasy fodder, indeed!)

MA

I don't know if I ever said this before but Kira's adoration of "Colonel Jack" and Daniel are SO great! I would be as flustered as she and I could hear Stephan's reaction to seeing Jack in uniform...Good LORD! That man is HANDSOME!

LOL! I had a crush on RDA as MacGyver when I was in high school, even though he was old enough to date my mother and he is THE reason I started watching SG1 in the first place. As the series progressed, I developed crushes on Daniel and Teal'C as well, but it's really hard to stop that pitter-pat of my heart when it comes to Jack O'Neill. And you describe him (those EYES) TO A TEE!

I know I've read this before and I may be repeating myself, but am LOVING IT as much this time as the first time!

MA

I think the reason I like Kira so much is that she thinks along the same lines as me.

Reading it again...just in the mood!