 deitarion/SSokolow 2005-10-04 . chapter 1Oops. I hate it when I accidentally review something twice. (The first was the first time I read it, the second was while re-reading it as I sorted my bookmarks) |
 deitarion/SSokolow 2005-10-04 . chapter 3One of my most anticipated fanfics. (I'm a variety addict and Ranma/Matrix crossovers are rare)
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 ssokolow 2005-02-04 . chapter 3 A highly interesting concept. I really want to read more.
(I do have an account but I'm feeling too lazy to log in) |
 Tatsu-ZZmage 2004-05-13 . chapter 3well that was certanly diffrent. saddly it seems dead so later |
 Kawaii-e 2004-01-28 . chapter 3At first, it seems like an ordinary Ranma 1/2 / Matrix crossover.
But it's good written, good plot and it's exciting to read. For me anyways. |
 happosai451 2004-01-27 . chapter 3 Write more! |
 Final-Fan 2004-01-25 . chapter 3 This fanfic was well done (although Ch. 2 seems to me to be disjointed) and fairly free from technical errors. It was obviously good enough for me to read the whole thing.
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Still, this story doesn't seem to do anything for me. If I see more posted, there's a decent chance I'll read it, but my hopes are low that I will ever be very enthusiastic about this. Sorry. |
 Sorrow 2003-05-01 . chapter 3 Interesting, I'm looking forward to seeing how this goes |
 Ranechi 2003-04-26 . chapter 3 This was a bit confusing at fist but I really got into it. It's got a great plot, a real twist in it, and because it's not the Ranma characters in the Matrix's shoes it's even better! You must read this! And Inu, PLEASE finish it, I'm hanging! |
 Andrew 2003-03-31 . chapter 3 I loved the story so far. I'm looking orward to more. |
 ariel stormcloud 2003-03-30 . chapter 3great story |
 Kyrtythren 2003-03-29 . chapter 3Wow, crazy fic...I liked it! The idea is quite quite interesting, though as other reviewers said it's kinda fragmented atm. Seemed to me like Neo wasn't the One and had died before reaching the Oracle, or something? And Mouse was in there...that seemed not to be explained well (yet), but I bet it will be. Given that everything will be explained eventually (i hope!) then it's a great story, though there are some holes right now *nod self*. |
 Dan Inverse 2003-01-26 . chapter 2Not bad! ^^ |
 Zsych 2003-01-26 . chapter 2 Interesting idea.
Though all things considered, i'd say that Ranma still has a long way to go to fully understanding the matrix. His whole train till you can do it concept might work against him, since he expects the abilities to come slowly and seperately.
Besides if Ranma is the One then what would Happi and Cologne be??? wonder if there ki abilities passed from their matrix selves to their real ones in order to give them their extended lives
ki after all is an ancient concept. maybe they'll ind it still available in the real world.
anyway, hope to see more
take care |
 Stormeagle 2003-01-25 . chapter 2 Great stuff man. But there seems to be a couple of plot holes that need filling pronto. It seems that you took a divergance/altiverse Matrix and a continuation Ranma and mixed them together in a wicked conflageration of chaos. Which is not necessarily bad. But if the readers don't know what changed, when it changed, and why it changed, they are likely to cause a bloody revolution. With lots of paper cuts involved. Either way, just throw some explanations in there and its all good. The Matrix is supposed to be more mindblowing than confusing. Keep writing though. You can only get better as you go along. ^_^
Stormeagle |