WELL...are ya gonna keep writing it or what? I like it lots. ^_^ Please continue!

wow! that was realy good! usually don;t go for the vegeta pov, but i am very impressed!! keep riting!!

neat story, cool that you wrote how and what vegeta was thinking. oh and in ch2 vegeta is talking about his hair growing. fullblooded saiyan hair doesn't grow. it stays the same length their whole lives. i think they mentioned that in the cell saga, i forget where exactly its in dbz-land somewhere.

okay here I go...
I think it's really good, please email me when u have aded anything please...
I think u could delve deeping into his feeling about the other Z fighter and such and just for the hell of it (comic relief) why don't you have him blow up something or break the Grav Chamber while his stressing out... this is only a segestion no need to follow, but I think it's coming along well

(do you know anything about Vegeta or Kakarrot's mothers?)

Well have fun writing!!
BUH BYE

Lovely, keep it up ;)

Thank you for thinking I'm a girl 'cause I would've been REALLY upset if you thought I was a guy.

Anyhoo, I like how ya did that, using his thoughts instead of an actual written thing. It seems that all your stories are cute so I'm not gonna say it anymore 'cause then I'd just be repeating myself. But this one didn't make Veggie as OOC as some of your other ones, which is still ok. (Since I usually make him OOC, I like it when other peeps do the same. Don't ask.)

Thanx for giving me some credit, I thought that was kool. So, just keep up the good work!

Vegeta's thoughts...Yippee! He's so cute!

There were a few grammar errors, but you have a great theme and it seems to be going pretty well. I await your next story.

Tyanto