great story it's very sad that you nver finish it! why?

This is a great story, it would be cool if you can finish it someday.

It's a VERY lovely story... which I hope you would continue. You know, everything I've read from TLW, that you wrote isn't finsihed! Are you still alive? :,(

Again, good gracious, lady, what a story! Finiush it oje day, please! It;s wonderful and I actually keeo imagining things about those memories and all..please, shed some light one day...WONDERFUL job, love this stpry so far. Keep going whenever you can.

I love the way this story is written and can't wait for more! Please update with more chapters soon!

I am enjoying your story very much, I hope that you continue to add chapters. My main critique is that you seem to switch between using Abigail and Ally.

great story ... post up more to this please

He he... That was funny! The ending I mean! Chicken cracks me up so hard! don't ask me why I call Marguerite "chicken". I just do! Darn nicknames stick to me everytime! I have to stop doing that! Anyways great chapter seven! Hope to see chapter 8 up and running soon! Zeus Fluff

o! I must have more! Immediately!

:) :)

This is SUPER good!

Okay, not fair! You have to finish. It is such a cute story. Keep up the good work!

this is so great. i can't wait to see what happens next. Please don't keep us wait too long.

Keys

YAY! Thank you very much! I love this story! I have read it a few times. Now I just hope you keep your promise and finish it soon! You kept your promise once and I know you will do it again. Again, THANK YOU!

And about time. When I was reviewing The Origin I was thinking about jogging your memory about this excellent story. Loved the chapter, heck I've loved the whole story, it's well written and you have got the characters reactions just right. Looking forward to reading how Marguerite helps Roxton recapture his memories. Also perhaps Marguerite and Veronica using their new gifts and their reaction to Challenger wanting to conduct experiments, there's all sorts of further stories for you to write(not planning in having a life are you). Now don't leave it so long for the next chapter, this is a great story, and I'll be watching my mail box for the alert email to come through.

write more soon

OMG! Thank you so much for this capter. Now if only another would follow. Hopefully sooner rather than later. Though I totally understand with the whole graduation thing. I myself am battling senioritis, and barly surviving. I'm anxiously awaiting to see how Marguerite and Veronica use their ner/old toy. Hopefully to annoy the Hell out of the men in the treehouse ;)