This was very nice. You're a good writer. Barbara was wonderful and really believable. You wrote a credible John as well. I especially like the scenes that occured in the hospital. I got lost in them.

I thought the rest of his family, though, was a little maudlin.

But I enjoyed the story overall.

aawwww this is so sweet! i love the way his father asked to see the scars. Well done :)

I'm a fan of Lost Souls so I thought I'd check this out...I'll be back with a full review later.

if you like ER fic, please go to http:/www.chesterserpage.homestead.com/ChestersERPage2.html my stories are posted under 'michelobe'. I can't upload them onto this site (bleep bleep bleep stupid!) so if you want to read them, please send me feedback about them, if you do, I really need to know what you think of them!

IF ONLY! however this is great just one teey tiny question - you dont really think that anything will happen that is similar to this

DEFIANTLY NOT but what a good story!

it's a good thing i'm in this computer lab by myself. i'm crying. that was a fantastic scene you set up there at the end.

What an excellent story! It would be great to see this one on the show!

That was a great ending to that episode! You never get to see John's family, so it was really nice. (At first, I thought Barbara was a girlfriend, and thought he was cheating on Kaylie, but I have to remember that's a different series of storys. lol ) Take it off Carter, take it all off! j/j I'm being mean. That was a very 'emotional' moment. ::grin::