 Gravind Divine 4/28/12 . chapter 1Hahahaha I actually understood what vegeta was saying! Hahahaha nice fic! |
 Mosho 1/6/10 . chapter 1That was hilarious! Poor Trunks, now cherry pies are ruined for him, lol. |
 Angel's Star 4/10/08 . chapter 1Haha! I loved Vegeta's comparison of love to a cherry pie! And then the apple pie...lol! Great work and well written to boot. Keep it up! |
 IVIaedhros 12/17/07 . chapter 1*Chuckles* I'll never look at pie the same way. |
 Gothicthundra 6/29/07 . chapter 1Hehe... I loved it... nice pie analization from Veggie... I love how you depict baby trunks. |
 bigherb81 6/10/07 . chapter 1Nice just another story showing the awsomeness that is Vegeta. Whether its fighting or women he has the knowledge. |
 ss10009 10/29/06 . chapter 1vegeta...talking about women. LOL. |
 Yukinna 6/9/06 . chapter 1Funny lol |
 Karessa 2/11/06 . chapter 1Now that a funny story to read. |
 bewize 5/2/05 . chapter 1*LOL* The ending line was fantastic. The entire story was pretty funny and I can imagine that Gohan didn't have many women to choose from for his crush... *lol* |
 Triffy 4/23/05 . chapter 1w i love it! this is my favorite story on - |
 Twinnie 9/12/04 . chapter 1Cute and funny... And what an interesting theory p *laughs* |
 ShibiChicken 4/6/04 . chapter 1Great fic. I didn't notise any errors in your writing but i say that you must have a odd subconsous to dream this up. Great work, you should tell us who that cherrie is and what gohan does to get it/her. great story. bye now. |
 Kurushii 6/15/03 . chapter 1O.o Y'know, even though this is VERY OOC for Vegeta, I pictured Vegeta explaining Gohan's problem and solution to him like Homer did to Bart from "The Simpsons". Heh. But, "Simpsons" aside, this was very good! |
 Lady BlackDragonFire 3/4/03 . chapter 1Vegeta and Mrs. Briefs? OO! I would actually like to see that pairing in a fic, as odd as that is. Anyways, great story, it's excellent! |