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SxS-FOREVER 2007-04-08 ch 13,	abuseAww! So Kawaii! ^^
SxS-FOREVER 2007-04-08 ch 3,	abuseHoe! you used my favorite song!! u rock!!
kirei-mistress 2006-01-24 ch 13,	abusegreat story! a unique one too!
Mariko 2005-01-21 ch 13, anon.	abusekonnichiwa! GREAT FIC!! THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! ;-; too bad it was all a dream...i thought it was real...BUT STILL!! GREAT FIC!! GREAT STORY!!...looking at ur profile ._. u wrote dear whoever too?! COOL!...but still...ponders how ironic...i meet authors who wrote other stories that i already read...i gotta pay more attention to authors nd profiles!! XD but i really liked that story!! VERY KAWAII! ^^ well, im gonna go now!! keep up the fantastic work! ja ne!
phoenixember 2004-09-06 ch 13, anon.	abusewell...that was kinda confusing...i didnt really like it when you skipped whole scenes like when sakura got into the coma and stuff...o well...wut'z dun is dun...dun dun dun...ok enough of the corny lines...-_-'...um...wut else was i gonna write?...ponders i forget so this is all...in creepy voice for now...MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA...MWAHAHAHAHAHA...MWAHAHAH-director cuts in ok ok thats enough for now...back to the changing room you go. me: sniff twirls cape walks away dramatically trips on cape THE END
impressed 2004-07-17 ch 13, anon.	abusethis is better writen than many books i know! if you dont mind me saying, this is mayhaps 30* better than the golden compass. really. great job!
nairda 2004-07-17 ch 12, anon.	abuseYUMMY nothings! were eriol and tomoyo having mold covered moments? anyway, this is my favorite (so far) of your fics
interested reader 2004-07-17 ch 11, anon.	abusegood job! i love it! you might want to explain the power that shot the boy back and who he was, also get more into the scene placement. But this is an awesome fic!
Yukigu Sugisaki 9988 2004-07-17 ch 10, anon.	abuseYou love D.N. Angel and thats romantic! i would prefer the s&s a little more subtle. less butting in by the author! i know where you live. god either loves or hates sayoran.
Anonymous reviewer 2004-07-17 ch 9, anon.	abuse1.) Shall I lead to S+S? yes 2.) School events (Dances, fundraisers, etc...), should any happen in the course until Summer? yes 3.) Input. good, i like the letter, i would be great if you could clarify sakuras illness
taumli1 2004-07-17 ch 8, anon.	abusegood! i would prefer not having a preview at the end, but it doesn't irk me that much. fun ending, pleasepleaseplease do the story without author butt-ins. i makes the story flow better. overall, good
mystery dude/ dudett 2004-07-17 ch 7, anon.	abuseno you shouldn't have a random babble section. interesting story, i like the new development.
mrs. delicate 2004-07-17 ch 6, anon.	abusefun. it sounds like sayoran would have liked to suddenly here "god must hate me". and you who hates boys, come on, not that part of the detail, hee hee giggles
crazy tv watcher 2004-07-17 ch 5, anon.	abuseI SEE NO PROBLEM WITH MAKING COMMENTS AT THE T.V.! EVEN WHEN YOUR ALONE! good chapter and i felt like i was really seeing the characters, good job on the descriptions. try doing this more in your writing.
the devil 2004-07-17 ch 4, anon.	abuseoh my master dont you know its impolite to try to take over people? it's bad manners and i wont cooperate. this isnt fire, you have enough of that at home. interesting use of the japanese language, but please, provide english trandlations somewhere, for those of us who aren't so informed.

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