This is so very cool, Beemish - why don't you write Big style? Oh, wow, I have to get right on your trail, now! :-))

Bravo ! Whoop Whoop ! loved this! can't wait to read more of your stories!

OK, but unrealistic in the sense that nobody noticed hat Bri wasnt even bleeding and that Kelly (who was acting) could be so cool about it an Kris (who believed it) so unemotional.

OK, few things to say here! First of all great story...progressed nicely, great characters Good work! Secondly..I don't know bout the story line..I don't really think Kelly would abandon her child..but she did leave him with his father so that makes it more of a possibility..this is my own opinion really...neways Thridly, I'm not to crazy bout Tiffany and Kyle starting a relationship...it's the whole age difference thing...but over all good work and keep writing.

No way. Not Kelly. I know she was an orphan, but would she ever be that desperate, that impulsive, that hateful, that suicidal? Don't get me wrong- your story was really terrific and exciting, and I loved the little details (like the chessboard metaphors.) But Kelly doesn't seem capable of covering up a past like that, much less living it.

I don't know why part of my review got chopped off. :( I particularly liked the way Sabrina and Tiff interacted together. It was great to see them working together while still having distinctly different personalities.

I enjoyed this story. I particularly liked the way Sabrina interacted. You did a great job. :)

I liked this story. it was nice to see almost all the Angels together.

I like this...it was very descriptive and defiently a interesting twist on Kelly's past. The concept of her abandoning her own child seems a little far fetched, but hey, anything is possible. Keep writing...I'd love to read more things by you. :)