wow... is that how it ends? huhu... it's a good story.. too good that i want you to continue it.. lol ^_^

Beautifully Written. It made my heart do those weird flip flops : ) good job! ^_^

That was so sad! Suboshi loving and wanting Yui was always one of the most sad and heartfelt storylines in the show. You captured it wonderfuly. I hope to see more Yui/Sub stories from you. Great work!!

Aw. such a nice lil fic.. its so sad though!! wah T_T My mom's obsessed w/ Tatu, lol. They're good tho. Update Njuusei!!

Wow and...Wow! That was so good! I love the song to the point that I am addicted to it when ever it comes on the radio and call me sick but I really could see that song describing Yui and Suboshi's relationship if they even had one to began with. And even though I like Yui I think that she really messed with poor Suboshi's head even if she didn't mean to sigh, well I guess that everything can not be candy-coated fairy tales ne? Love your one shot and I hope you will write more soon.

I rather liked it! It wasn't bad. Very nice actually...