A wonderful story. Brought me to tears.

Thumbs up.

I just wanted to say thank you for a wonderful story. Your story of Braska's past fits together perfectly with the facts in FFX and the guides. I love how Braska is driven to find his way to Home even if it means he might be censored and I also loved how unassuming Braska is in your story and yet how much of an impact he has everywhere he goes.

Thank you for expanding on Braska's story!

All I can say is...wow. This is the best Braska bio have ever read. I'm doing some research right now cause I'm writing a fic with him in it right now. Actually, except for Braska already knowing Rin and his wife's name, I could reference my readers here to learn more about him. Excellent job!

That was absolutely AMAZING. :)

Wow, that was great... took me a while to decipher the Al-Bhed (i'm stubborn, and wanted to do it by myself..) Again, great story!
~Angel:)

I am still crying from this its soo beautiful and maybe touching...:sniff sniff:..Oh!Sorry but does Braska have silver hair?I thought it was brown!Someone tell me!

It's been a while since I last read one of your heart wrenching, beautifully told stories. . .
- - -um hold on a sec, I need to find more Kleenex- - -
Reading your fanfics allows me to indulge my irrational obsession with FFX. Thank you again for, past, present, and future distractions -
¡§You tell good story, well.¡¨
Yikes! It's 4am!

OMG... I couldn't stop crying after I read this...

This was a great story! It finally gives Braska the recognition for even being in the game! Like someone else said... Flipping back and forth for Al bhed translations ruined it somewhat.

But all in all... Great story!

Very good stuff. Though converting to the Church of Yevon doesn't really jive with the impression I got of Rin.

Also, there were some rather important events in the story that seemed glossed over. And looking back and forth for the translation of Al Bhed really killed the flow of things.

This is a truly memorable story. Incredibly well written, it paints a story of the past with amazing detail and interest throughout.
I enjoyed reading it immensely.
thanks.
tua : )

Well written as always... and beautiful and heartwrenching. You truly have a gift in making your stories real and believable.

That was GREAT!!!
Nobody has done a story like this before so it was an new concept but it was wonderful.
The best FFX story I have read.

BM

This is absolutely incredible! The grammer is great, spelling great, but more importantly, the story is great. The plot just makes sense, with the interactions with Cid, Rin, the timeline, etc. Very well done. Kudos, kid. A story like this and I almost want another chapter, even though its not plausable. Either way, this is an absolute gem of a story.

Very very very touching. Oneof the better fics in this section also.