...this is such an amazing Gaiden angst story ...Great Job

Who is this dragon? And I thought Gods are immortal and umm.. if they were immortal why aren't they shown at heaven? I'm confused with this Gaiden thing.

beautiful prose. not many people can write such enigmatic characters like goujun but you have managed to with astounding proportions! it would be nice if this perspective of the dragon could be explored more. Ü

nice fic.

beautiful. im glad you wrote a gaiden fic. ive always wanted to know what happened there. ive made a gaiden fic also, an attempt to find out how nataku ended up in a coma, though the others characters are alos involved. if you're interested, it's "remembrances of things past," also here on .

this is a beautiful piece of work. will you continue it? if not, it's enough to stand on its own. _

Very good..

I can consider helping u make this into ongoing fic if u want..

There's still ALOTSA* points fer development.

1) Deathfic. How Kenren reacts

2)wad abt GOku and Konzen?

3)Did tenpou REALLI die?

4) He's a god, so he can't realli die, shd he?

5) Gaiden is a VERY* intriguing subject. In fact, most of my stories shall intersect with Gensomaden Saiyuki Gaiden itself, due to the fact tt i love Konzen, Nataku, etc.

6) Derefore, consider a sequel to this.

Arigato fer ya time.

Lotsa wadeva and warever,

C.S. kA DKonzen in mirc and icq.