Like how you did Cordelia's calling by the strenght and speed, other then the usual magic.

Almost stopped reading after you announced the ships you would use. (Spike is evil and Spuffy discusting. But sicne it;s your fanfic not canon, I can accept you made him slightly less evil. Still: YUK)
About C/A. I believe it;s a shame, since you were already devellopping some nice C/X (Why did you made her Xander's long-time love while he never gave her a thought before on the show, if you were doing nothing with it anyway :?: ), but since Cordy hasn't devellopped the brotherly vibe towards Angel like on aTS in S2 btvs yet , I guess C/A makes sense...
however, it would have been nice if you ahd done a scene where they told Cordelia ANGEL IS A VAMPIRE! -they didn;t tell her on the show till 2x06!

@ Acacia Jules
the whole Mole-thing (aside of being discusting) only happened in Buffy, the Movie. They never mentioned any such things on the Series, not with Buffy no with any of the other slayers we ahve seen.
And potential slayers do have the skills, that is why Kendra was teached by the counsil from early on. (more when you see S7)

There aren't any so called 'qualities' of a Slayer. Each one is unique. The only way the council can find a slayer before hand is by a birthmark (mole) they have on their right shoulder, close to the collar bone.
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Otherwise, before hand, they're just perfectly normal girls. Once they're endued with their powers, they're the same as before, but they're stronger, faster, they have the ability to use any weapon ever created just by picking it up. They get enhanced senses, which might take awhile for them to get control over, especially the strength (there could be a lot of breakage at first), but their personalities are whatever they were before. And Personality is determined by nature AND nurture. (Birth, genes, and environment)
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There's really no way to determine a slayer, unless you see her fight. Because, with all the Slayers in Waiting they have, it's obvious even the mole isn't a true give away.

I loved reading this story. You have to update! I love the pairings you made!Well, cya

Great job. I love C/A. More soon I hope.

Yay! More cordy/angel please!

Great story. Great idea. I also love the parings, Cordelia/Angel and Buffy/Spike are my favorites. My only complaint is that you vamped Willow, and I don't even like her. Other than that It is awsome, keep writting. A few dozen more chapters and I'll be happy.:)

Good chapter. I spotted a few mistakes, but a good beta can clean those up for you.

And I applaud your effort to get back into this fic. I know what it's like to come back to writing after a long hiatus. It's difficult to get back into the characters and the flow. I think it's great that you haven't just abandoned this story.

O! This is getting real good. Post more soon. Because I'm dying to read more and I want more C/A.

This is getting good. I love it! Please more C/A!

This is great! Glad that your making it C/A. I also like how you made Cordy special and a slayer.

This is great! I love this fic. Cordy as the slayer would be great. Going to read more now.

This is a great Cordy as a Slayer story.

This story has taken an interesting turn from where I last read it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

:o) And it keeps getting better :o) Again, loving the story! Hope you post more soon!

Like the way you made Cordy special, can't wait for the explenation.