This is a very nice story about MeiLing and her immeasurable troubles at this time during her life. And really, when I was reading the fic I was thinking that this was also about you in a way. Itz very sad and grey. As for the poem, I think it very good and fits the story very well. Your poems aren't bad, just that some are ok and others are great. This one here is a really good one.

this isn't bad, pretty interesting and somewat ispiring, da character was a good choice, and well written. good job, keep it comming

*wipes tears*
geeee
that was sooo depressing!
lol, i know that was the point, but that is just depressing depressing!
nice work! can't wait to read your other fics!

Admiring, how you showed the stubborn spirit she had even in the times she wanted to die she didn't. Pride and stubbornness is a hard mix but a good one in the right people.

Meiling angst. Ah.. Yeah, I write it, too.

Anyway -- Very nice and well written. I love the poem in the beginning, it's great. The story fits in nicely, even if it's a one chapter.. And it all ties together in the end.

And it's good to know you didn't write it for reviews. And, glad you didn't write this as a Sakura one.. I think Meiling makes more sense in this. Maybe people who read it, who are Meiling haters, then maybe they'll understand her?

Anyway -- nicely done.

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its a really good story

Seriously. NE! Syaoran flies to the rescue- shaking her out of her reverie