This is like tripping. Your descriptions are obviously short, yes - only a few words, point-black and not incredibly deepened - but they are more than enough. They feel long, and complete, and alive; as I read it the colors and forms appear in my mind on the spot and it seems like I'm watching yet another episode streaming right in front of my eyes. (:

interesting... .

You do good short'n'creepy. Lade-dah. Have a cookie.

short but interesting...

Incredibly short, but it was enough for me... I liked it! *shudder* That was so creepy... Lotsa Love, Jeanette

SEQUEL OR DIE! _ -_ -_-

Loved it! _ -_ -_-

I love it. Great job on the writing and grammer. Short but VERY good.

COOL! I only saw the series a while ago. Your short story...or poem thingie fit so well with the show .

.Nanaki's Angel_

Wow. I have no idea what that was about. But I liked the little thingies. They were cool. I also like the word verdant. I think that means green with growing, but I dont remember. We had a test on that word today in english class, but now i forget what it means. Maybe it has a double meaning.. like.. uh.. read. i dont know. Thats a homophone or something. This is too confusing. I'm sticking to math.

WOW! I really want to see this anime now...

All I can say is dang. This is soooooo good! And for such a short story too! Keep writing more like this!

This is very well written and goes with the whole theme of the story. Keep up the good work! _

Short, oh so very short. But really desolate and, surprisenly, very good for such a short story.

how absolutely nifty...