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Elspeth
2009-04-21 . chapter 15
This was a truly lovely story. Thank you.
Mycroft07
2008-11-04 . chapter 15
Excellent story! Thoroughly enjoyed every moment of it. Bringing the silmarions into the story was a masterstroke. The battle between Sauron and Elrond was amazing as well... do write more!
SoConfusified
2008-06-06 . chapter 9
...Wow.

MAJOR PLOT TWIST!

That was the most unexpected thing ever...
You are awesome.
SoConfusified
2008-06-06 . chapter 4
...? Did that really just happen?
Wow. This is going to be -interesting-...

;)
elsbeth
2006-08-05 . chapter 15
What a lovely story! Thank you
Lilandriel
2006-05-12 . chapter 15
fantastic. absolutely fantastic! one of the best stories i've ever read. there's nothing about this story i didn't like; it was beautiful through and through. your style of writing is just enchanting, and the way you bring the characters to life, give them personalities and quirks and emotions is supurb

wow. this is so going on my faves' list, and i really hope that other people see it and read it, for i know they'll love it as much as i have.

x
Kira-k
2005-03-23 . chapter 15
It was more than 2 years ago, I started to read this story. I finished the last two chapters now, because I wasn't visiting the for almost a year. (Perhaps I left some reviews without logging in as Kira.)
But I'm glad I came back, and I've saved your story and penname, so I could find this again and finish it.

I love this story. I love how you weaved your tale, how your style was original, yet reminded me to Tolkien's books. I loved, how you made this alternative ending, and the characters' reactions. I loved how you added the little details, not forgetting about Maglor or Thranduil, and how you made Elrond the "unwilling hero" of your story.

I found this story when I was searching for Elrond-centric fanfictions, and you've managed to put up a very high standard. I'm glad you have started and finished the story, and I enjoyed every word I read. Thank you for giving me this wonderful experience. *bows*

I've a question. If I started to translate Desolation into Hungarian to share it with my friends, would you give your premission for it?
heartnut
2005-01-16 . chapter 15
Wow. I don't get it, but wow. I love the way you tell stories, Losseniaiel. You just have a magical way of connecting things together. I loved how you brought Faramir and Eowyn into the story, and especially Arwen's legacy. Nice blend of canon and hope.
Crystal113
2005-01-06 . chapter 15
Oh. My. Word.

I am astounded, amazed... *resists tempation to grab thesaurus*

This was absolutely wonderful. Elrond is one of my favorite characters. I love it all. I don't have any one favorite part. I do have to say the Silmaril as the Arkenstone was a stroke of genius. The battle with the Ring in Mount Doom was wonderful. The battle with Sauron was a masterpiece. I'd continue going on, but I'm running out of things to say to describe the genius of this story...

Oh, I must thank you for elimiating a plot bunny to do an AU If- Sauron- got- the Ring. I would never have thought of using Elrond. But he fits. None of the Fellowship would have long survived if he had gotten the Ring.

This was a wonderful fic and I enjoyed every minute of reading it.
Unsung Heroine
2004-12-25 . chapter 15
"Beyond the seas, that same night fell warm and silent about the Elf-barrow that looked out upon the Ancient West from the hill above the falls of Henneth Annûn."

Ah, yes. That's what I've been waiting for *wipes away tears* Really.

Just one question: Who was the drover? Didn't really figure that out if I'm honest. Will you tell me? *smiles nicely*
Mystical G Panther
2004-12-22 . chapter 15
REVIEW? HELL YA!
DO YOU EVEN NEED TO ASK THAT!!
AI!!
I LOVED THIS STORY!
AI!!
THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER EVER!
I ALMOST CRIED...AGAIN.
I LOVED IT!
-MYSTICAL PANTHER
KissTheRainGirl12489
2004-12-21 . chapter 15
Yeah, you made him live.Good lossenial.
Elwen
2004-12-18 . chapter 15
I'm speechless. Why are you writing fanfic with a skill like this?
Lackwit
2004-12-17 . chapter 15
A wonderful end to a fantastic AU- you have written some of my favorite fics of all, let alone E/C fics.

Beautiful use of words. Congrats on a job well done.
alena
2004-12-17 . chapter 15
Eru, this is too beautiful.

The eagle's eye description at the beginning, and all that followed are stunning, but also more than just descriptions that one usually sees: to me, there was such an expansive feeling to them, one that truly fitted with the power and beauty of Tolkien's world. And everything about them just kept on building toward that glorious emotional release. It's extremely moving, especially coming after all that had happened in previous chapters.

Thank you once again for this truly wonderful fic.
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