I like it but i don't think you should continue it. If you go on, i just think it will drift from where the show is going, but it's your story. A good one too.

Really, really good! I love it, but my heart breaks for what has to happen to them. At least they are together! Update with part 2 soon, I love your writing!
thanx and Merry Christmas!

I really enjoyed this fic.
I really think that you should do a sequel; you're a really good writer.

hurray for you! That was soo good. I cannot WAIT for the sequl...

I'm here! *waves* And I'm reviewing! Oooh- now I really have to know what happens next! I always have a lot of fun reading Protection Program fics- the new identities are always so fascinating. And since she'll be with Vaughn? Doubly intriguing! I can't wait!

Lord havd mercy if ANY one finds you for leaving a cliff hanger like that girl!! THIS is soooo goood! Update, PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!
thanx!

Knotty tummy, and very anxious for the next chap! Cliffhangers will be the death of me, I think- I love this fic!

i AM anticipating the next chapter!!! but please hurry I'm not very aptient! and PLEASE let them survive!!!

This is quite inteesting, I just became interested in Alias and I am already a huge Vaughn and Sydney shipper! They totally belong together! Thanks for writing this, I am enjoying it, please write more soon. I can't wait!

I have to admit that when I read the first chapter, I didn't think I would read the whole story.
But then, I tried anyway because it was very well written.
Now, I'm waiting impatiently for the next chapters.
The way you write about the feelings, the emotions... it's amazing.
Keep on writing, please...

OOH this is good! Keep writing!

don't leave me hanging to long! I love it!!!

this is just so wonderful, I am truly enjoying this, I wish I could give you a more useful review, but I have nothing to critic, except that the next chapter isn't already up!!! Please continue at your earliest convienience!!!

yeah, I'm glad you're not done yet, I was really getting into the angst of this peice, you've done a great job with creating that stream-of-consiousness (spelling!?!) and bluuriness feel to it, the only thing I'd suggest is dividing up some of your bigger paragraphs, it just makes it easier to read, otherwise just keep up the great work!

"I grabbed my heart to hear it pound, over and over, faster and faster."
wow what vivid imagery, I am seriously in tears, I FELT her frantic state, and the hair pulling and skirt shreeding, I don't know if its cuz I'm PMSing but I just could really FEEL her pain and helpless furry! GREAT JOB!