I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow. That's amazing. I don't really know what else to say. Well done.

Hauntingly sweet.

I love your fics. =3

so sad thisis going into my c2

someone(ripper de la blackstaff) have translated your story in french and I adored it. So I came here to read it in english and tell you it's wonderful...oh my god I cried!lol
congratulations

Well that's dark fic if I've ever read one. I hope he doesn't really think she's done it on purpose! Very sad. Keep up the good work. Hope you'll take a look at my fics as well.

Oh...that is so sad. I'm not a fan at all of Hermione and Severus, but I'm going through all your fics. This is one of the better ones-all of them are very well written, understand-but this one is really moving.
A crazed fanatic of Lily and Severus,
-Lavinia Lavender

You know until the end, I thought the guy was Harry, but I guess it's okay that it's Severus. This story is very good. Disturbing, but good none the less.

Tragic!

This was wonderfully angsty and well done. Not at all what I expected. I felt sick after I read it. Of course, that's a compliment, considering the subject matter of the fic. Also, I'm impressed with your use of present tense. It's hard to pull it off, and you did a great job.

My hackles were raised when I read 'he feels clammy, and a bit chilled'. and then came Snape's fantastic, haunting homecoming. 'How could there be so much blood?' This was powerful and almost cruel, and the summary was just excellent--mysterious and the slightest bit misleading. This piece will definitely be hard to forget.

Merry (who is very jealous of you)

Wow! Haunting . . . That is the only thing that comes to mind, and poor Severus "why are you doing this" that was a great line very powerful. I have enjoyed all of your fics so far! Very very very very poignant piece here. You said so much in very little space and it wasn't rushed at all. It was perfection at it's finest! Hope to see more from you soon! Cosmo

Wow - this is truly awesome.

good god almighty. that sounds about like something i would write. bravo, that was very unexpected.

Ow.


That was immensely powerful.


Other than that. . .


*ow*.